New song(with Banjo)

[juineaux]

Here's a quick little recording I did yesterday morning. It's a new song of mine, with the banjo. There was only one mic, so my voice is louder than the banjo, and the High string on the banjo seemed to be louder than the other strings....but tell me what you think anyways-


http://www.tomcadaret.com/share/songs/T ... iswine.MP3

[Trippin Hillbilly]

I like it. It could use a little variation but it has a very catchy chorus. Great stuff as always.

[brian_ok]

wow you have a nice voice.

where in Ohio do you live?

[juineaux]

I moved down to southeast ohio(for school) a couple of months ago, but I'm home for the winter in northwestern ohio(findlay area)

[Alazais]

You've got a very good voice. I agree on the Variation though as posted above.

[Sciaracastro]

nice voice

yea, use some variations
add some lead guitar stuff too...it sounds kinda empty just w/ the banjo IMO

[myxomatosis]

can you post the lyrics?

[juineaux]

can you post the lyrics?

Sure, here they are....they're kinda dark, ask me if you have any questions-

Marianna had her white dress on
And the wolves, how they lined the hills
A cold wind came in & blew her down
& the god of war swept down and opened his arms
& the god of war swept down and opened his arms

Is there blood in this wine
is there blood in this wine
is there blood in this wine

The fire started from a hole in the well
Young boy paul saw it all with his own little eyes,
With a 3 inch blade & a warm coat on his back
He ran beneath the dying tree, where the boy was hanged
He ran and he fell, & he fell on his blade
He fell on his blade & that's where he lay

Is there blood in this wine
is there blood in this wine
is there blood in this wine

[markTR]

nice dude

i really love the sound of the banjo. i've always wanted to learn how to play, just to lazy i guess. nice vocals too.

[6_strings_for_life]