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the "gravedigger live" thread reminded me that i did a cover of gravedigger, I should have it up tonight. it was pretty much live...heh...well, i did one take on guitar and one take on vocals..so basically right??..well anyways, ill put it up once i get it. my friends back home are working on mastering the songs right now.

please post some critiques or any comments...thanks

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mavonw wrote:the "gravedigger live" thread reminded me that i did a cover of gravedigger, I should have it up tonight. it was pretty much live...heh...well, i did one take on guitar and one take on vocals..so basically right??..well anyways, ill put it up once i get it. my friends back home are working on mastering the songs right now.

please post some critiques or any comments...thanks

Mark
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I know, i was being sarcastic

here's the gravedigger cover

http://s50.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2M8P ... LQYFD9YQPY
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Post by Blake »

mavonw wrote:I know, i was being sarcastic

here's the gravedigger cover

http://s50.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2M8P ... LQYFD9YQPY
sounded pretty damn good, my only complaint is that the rythm sounded kind of off. other than that....great job :thumbsup:
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thank ya thank ya
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any takers..anybody like/dislike? originals specifially

thanks,
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Post by horsmar15 »

I listened to the orginal. Pretty good voice, but too airy at times which causes you to lose pitch at times. Good crisp recording quality. As for the song itself, I thought it was alright, but the lyrics in the verse didn't seem to flow that well. The chorus was better though.
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Post by mattinbeloit »

You have a very nice voice man, i really enjoyed it, one of the better ones i have heard on this forum, you have a good range and control it very well. The guitar sounded really good too, you sped up a little bit in parts but conpensated for it. good job.
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thanks guys
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