Dream I Killed God. Critique plz.

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SingLike_Dave
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Dream I Killed God. Critique plz.

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http://media.putfile.com/Dream-I-Killed-God-Audio

Tell me what you think? (Not on lyrics.Just added that for effect. Guitar wise)

Basically just the intro.
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I used to play for all of the lonliness, that nobody notices now.
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"<i>Dreamed</i> I Killed God", if you wanna get anal about it.

I almost thought that buzzing at the beginning was an intentional effect... that could've sounded cool.

Your voice sounded pretty good, but it would've sounded better without certain words drawn out the way they were.

Overall, good job. Now you need to put 'Minarets' before it :)
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Post by SingLike_Dave »

Its actually the B string at the first. buzz with the E powerchord.
Was gonna re-record it but.. it sounded sweet so.

thanks dude ;)
D&T4LIFE

I used to play for all of the lonliness, that nobody notices now.
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