Original Acoustic/Vocals - Please Critique

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worldofsweetness
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Original Acoustic/Vocals - Please Critique

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This is a song I wrote around the time my grandfather passed away - the lyrics are based upon a poem he wrote. This is a favorite of mine, let me know what you guys think!

Note: This is the first cut of the song - hopefully there will be some strings in the middle section!

http://s1.ultrashare.net/hosting/fs/c26c2c179d76cb97/
"Math, my dear boy, is merely the lesbian sister of biology." -Peter!
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