*****The Ultimate Original Song Competition II*****

smedley · Post by **smedley** » Fri Sep 30, 2005 8:17 pm

Alrighty, I just want to say that everyone was excellent. I wish I could write like all of you.

Anyways, I know votes didn't really matter in this contest, it was supposed to be more of critiqueing, but here are the top three

1. Rob
2. Sarah
3. Mitch

Good job everyone.

Thanks to those who submitted their songs, and to those who critiqued!

Tranman66 · Post by **Tranman66** » Fri Sep 30, 2005 10:23 pm

GreedylilPig wrote:
Tranman66 - Enjoyed it quite a bit. Brilliant at some points, somewhat sloppy at others, enjoyable nonetheless. Some constructive criticism (I hope), is that the song seems to lack a refrain. At points just seems like random playing. Fine playing, don't get me wrong, just not all that cohesive. Particularly enjoyed the piece from 2:30 onward.

thanks for the comment.

i'll keep on improving

Sciaracastro · Post by **Sciaracastro** » Sat Oct 01, 2005 9:10 pm

damn i didnt see this thread...
i just listened to all the songs and they all are very good
i must say i really really really liked pat's one though...very good job man!