FULL Dream Girl Cover

trippinbilly314 · Post by **trippinbilly314** » Sun Aug 21, 2005 11:27 pm

i worked on this all day, the drums were the biggest pain in the ass ever but i decided to slow the tempo of the song done significantly. i like it alot. here is the link, feedback is appreciated. thanks

http://www.icompositions.com/auditorium ... hoto=20700

Beauford33 · Post by **Beauford33** » Sun Aug 21, 2005 11:49 pm

Im not going to sugarcoat anything, It was pretty rough all around. In the beginning, the deeper voice was off and didnt sound like it was in key. Guitar was decent, but the drums ruined it for me. And it didnt seem in time at times. Your voice was alright, but it didnt mesh well with the song. Just keep at it and keep practicing.

T1nM4n · Post by **T1nM4n** » Sun Aug 28, 2005 6:33 pm

i kinda felt like the drums didnt match up with the guitar, idk it just doesnt sound natural

Trippin Hillbilly · Post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Sun Aug 28, 2005 7:15 pm

Yeah, there are alot of timing issues that you need to sort out. The intro was especially bad.

xan. · Post by **xan.** » Mon Aug 29, 2005 12:33 am

your voice was out of key in the intro and as everyone pointed out the drums were a little off. other than those problems i think it sounded good and i enjoyed it. i think the guitar was right on and you have a good voice. it seemed like your voice got better and better has the song progressed.

trippinbilly314 · Post by **trippinbilly314** » Mon Aug 29, 2005 9:23 pm

thanks xan, more songs will come soon

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Mon Aug 29, 2005 10:29 pm

hey miguel, you gotta change your avatar. it asks me for a username/password when i click on a page that you've posted on.

GSR · Post by **GSR** » Tue Aug 30, 2005 2:42 am

dmbguitar718 wrote:hey miguel, you gotta change your avatar. it asks me for a username/password when i click on a page that you've posted on.

Trippin Hillbilly · Post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Tue Aug 30, 2005 3:22 am

Yeah, sorry dudes. My bad.

GSR · Post by **GSR** » Tue Aug 30, 2005 3:26 am

jared · Post by **jared** » Tue Sep 13, 2005 9:18 pm

yeah, that cover was pretty rough all around. drums were slow, which kinda threw off everything else. there are vocal peaks as well.

getoffmywalrus · Post by **getoffmywalrus** » Wed Sep 14, 2005 4:34 pm

no offense, but the beginning really creeped me out