**NEW Original** Please Critique, Im Grateful

trippinbilly314 · Post by **trippinbilly314** » Wed Aug 17, 2005 11:10 pm

Its called "Because of You". Its not done yet but i did a rough mix for a girl who wanted to hear it. it just needs to be eq'd but that will be later...ALL feedback is welcome. thanks alot DMB tabs!

http://www.icompositions.com/artists/trippinbilly314

T1nM4n · Post by **T1nM4n** » Wed Aug 17, 2005 11:31 pm

i think it has potential, i feel like vocals could use a lil work, kinda sounds like ur holding back maybe, and the YEAHHHHHHHHHH part is a like shaky sounding, i dont know i cant critique volcals cuz i suck at singing, but its got a lot of potential

trippinbilly314 · Post by **trippinbilly314** » Wed Aug 17, 2005 11:34 pm

alright, thanks for the input man. i will touch up the vocals

katie · Post by **katie** » Thu Aug 18, 2005 12:05 pm

I'm sorry man. I waited like fifteen minutes for this thing to download on my computer and then it wouldn't come up. I'm bummed to not be able to listen to the recording right now!

I'll be back with unfaulty equipment hopefully.

trippinbilly314 · Post by **trippinbilly314** » Thu Aug 18, 2005 2:11 pm

thats fine, just whenever is cool, id appreciate it

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NEW Original Please Critique, Im Grateful

NEW Original Please Critique, Im Grateful