SMILE -----> a new original

firedancer86 · Post by **firedancer86** » Sun Sep 07, 2003 2:07 am

well, an idea for one anyhow... I played this right after fooling around with before I change...I rearranged the tuning and cme up with this happy sounding diddy in about 3 min...recorded it (for safe keeping), and went to change the strings

tell me what you all think...

INSPIRATION: my girlfriend again

http://www.cadenzaspell.com/smile.mp3

mbgreen · Post by **mbgreen** » Sun Sep 07, 2003 2:43 am

That was way cool. It had me movin' from the start. It sounds like it could have been a classic seventies rock song...but it was cool cause it didnt remind me of anything in particular. Good music.

Trippin Hillbilly · Post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Sun Sep 07, 2003 2:33 pm

That's awesome fire..
Very happy, very groovy tune. I find it so damn hard to write happy tunes, seems like everything I write seems to be all depressing...ahh, pisses me right off..
This is cool! good stuff kid..

isaac · Post by **isaac** » Sun Sep 07, 2003 2:35 pm

hehe, i know what you mean, trippin' about it being damn hard to write happy tunes. they usually turn out jazzy, but that's cool too.

anyway! i liked it a lot fire. as everyone has said, very uptempo and fun, and it does make a person want to smile. glad to hear you've got some lady inspiration, too.

NoNotThat · Post by **NoNotThat** » Sun Sep 07, 2003 6:05 pm

That's awesome, fire! What tuning did you use?

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Sun Sep 07, 2003 6:09 pm

very happy little poppy tune. and i didn't mean poppy like n-sync brittany speirs, i mean its good and its something you kinda just tap your foot to. good work, wanna hear some lyrics.

Als6StringRoars · Post by **Als6StringRoars** » Tue Sep 09, 2003 9:02 pm

first thing i thought of when it started was Beatles...good stuff man

Pickles · Post by **Pickles** » Tue Sep 09, 2003 9:12 pm

oo very nice... reminded me of something at the beginning, but definately got your touch hehe

firedancer86 · Post by **firedancer86** » Wed Sep 10, 2003 12:50 am

WOW...I have my own touch

thanks all...and the tuning is D A C F G C

geekmug · Post by **geekmug** » Wed Sep 10, 2003 4:29 am

My only complaint is to lay off the low-D sometimes when you are strumming those open chords.. otherwise, that's tight.. and yes, needs some lyrics and I will definitely give it a listen if and when.. btw, did you put chorus on that or is that just the strings pitches wavering from being so loose?

firedancer86 · Post by **firedancer86** » Wed Sep 10, 2003 7:10 pm

probably just being do loose...no chorus...the strings were more than 3 months old!!!!!!

but thanks