Crash Into Me, all bass (bass, harmonies, melody) (HTTP DL)

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IronMike778 wrote:
i like tictacs wrote:What does his guitar playing have to do with my bass playing? Or what does that post have to do with this thread? No doubt he is a good musician. He just had a different idea of what he was looking for in a recording, that's all. Like I said, maybe I'm posting my stuff on the wrong forums.
I was only trying to say that because he's such a talented musician his opinions/thoughts/critiques should carry a lot of credibility. But instead, it seems he got slammed for voicing his objective critique. That's all.
I appreciate the compliments, but I wouldn't say I always carry credibility. I'm far from perfect.
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wkpggrvn2001 wrote:i think the problem is other people saying shit about other people's critques. tictacs is the only one that should, people hear music differently and thats why critiques will vary.
:thumbsup: i've been guilty of this before too. the person that puts up the recording should be the only one that has anything to say about someone's critique.
CBalvarez wrote: Yea your right man, people critique alot of peoples stuff on here way to much
This is the most rediculous statement I've ever read. I'm thinking of putting it in my signature

as far as the recording goes
it was ok, nothing wrong w/ it. i liked it. soothing, relaxing. you should think about doing a whole album of this stuff, making it perfect, and then selling it as a relaxing tape. i think the "soloing" if that's what you want to call it did get a bit messy in parts, but nothing that would take me out of the trance that it put me in. i would follow pat's advice and move a bit up and down the fret board some more. not add more notes, just move octaves in the notes you did play. get high some get low some. it adds emotion.

good job though overall. :thumbsup:
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appfro, thank you for the good criticism/critique. i appreciate it and will take it into consideration.
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i really like appfro's idea of doing a whole album of it. i would try it...but i have no recording devices better than my rc-20...if you do any more definately post them
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im about to do a grey street.
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cooooooooooooooooool

...you should try to actually follow the vocals w/ a bass line. get the melody down and then maybe do some jam or solo stuff when there would be no singing. that would be freaking tits.
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