Song Lyrics I wrote

[czech]

So i was thinkign about doing a recording, but i wanted to get feedback on my lyrics first.

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I like fat girls
I like bacardi
so come on baby
lets go party

*up tempo*
I'll buy you a rum n coke
we'll tell dead baby jokes
you dont have to be shy
because i'm fat too

*keep up tempo*
I like fat girls
I like bacardi
so come on baby
lets go party

I'll chop some lines of coke
we'll tell dead hebrew jokes
you dont have to be shy
because i'm fat too

accapella*
fat people hump eachother thats what we dooooooooo

[Swede]

i really like the I'll chop some lines of coke
we'll tell dead hebrew jokes

[DMB Joy Ride]

Hey, lyrics don't mean everything so that could still come out sounding awesome

[thejoe]

record that, its fucking awesome

[GreedylilPig]

*tear*

[NoNotThat]

I'm moved as well...very emotional shit, checkii

[Kukini]

i like it, has a sort of... well you know, feeling to it.

[onid41]

So i was thinkign about doing a recording, but i wanted to get feedback on my lyrics first.

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so come on baby
lets go party

venga boys?