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rollmebackagain
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my first original

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here's a little riff I made up today... I added some background crowd noise so it would sound like i was a rock star or something... tell me what you think... also, anyone's invited to write some words to it and add them to it... in fact, i encourage you, please do!

http://s6.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2YU75 ... E6RGWJW71G
"This song is very particularly for all the people that are here, and all the people who aren't here, and all the people that can't play the guitar." ~Dave Matthews 10.3.93
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That's not too bad for a first man, I can tell listening to it tho that you play alot of dave, but keep experimenting with original shit man, it will help give you a more unique sound. I hate that no one responds to or ignores peoples original songs on here, I love listening to shit people wrote. if you want you can check out my originals at http://www.tallboys.org keep it up man
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Post by katie »

that's a great swing on the bass notes up to the higher notes. the audience, is a great addition...hehe... :D

you make it seem so easy.
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