new lyrics to sitting waiting wishing. o=please crtique

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new lyrics to sitting waiting wishing. o=please crtique

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here is some verse lyrics i wrote to sitting waiting lyrics melody. i dont write much but i thought i should start.

this song is about having a crush on your gf friend

song:
well i like this girl and her friend too
and we should do like all good friends do
and ill always have enough time for you

shes only here when you're not there
and if not true would be not fair
and 3 of a kind is better than a pair


we only did that while you were sleepin
but its only you when were on the weekend
and i hope when its done we'll still be speakin





those are my only finished verses, the others trail off
For us living any other ways was nuts. with all the goodie-goodies working shitty jobs for bum pay checks, took the subway work and worried about their bills were dead. they were suckers, they had no balls. if we wanted something we just took it, and if anybody complained twice they got hit so hard believe me they never complained again
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look over in random post thread
don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this love's too good to last and i'm too old to dream

don't grow up too fast don't embrace the past
this life's too good to last and i'm too young to care

don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this life could be the last and we're too young to see
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Re: new lyrics to sitting waiting wishing. o=please crtique

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mrjones wrote:here is some verse lyrics i wrote to sitting waiting lyrics melody. i dont write much but i thought i should start.

this song is about having a crush on your gf friend

song:
well i like this girl and her friend too
and we should do like all good friends do
and ill always have enough time for you

shes only here when you're not there
and if not true would be not fair
and 3 of a kind is better than a pair


we only did that while you were sleepin
but its only you when were on the weekend
and i hope when its done we'll still be speakin





those are my only finished verses, the others trail off
the bold ones are a little weak IMO, other than that, not bad.
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yeah, i never really liked those lines but i wanted everyone to know after the 1st stanza what this song is about
For us living any other ways was nuts. with all the goodie-goodies working shitty jobs for bum pay checks, took the subway work and worried about their bills were dead. they were suckers, they had no balls. if we wanted something we just took it, and if anybody complained twice they got hit so hard believe me they never complained again
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Those are the sleaziest lyrics ever. :lol: I wanna rail your friend but when you get back I can rail you too. :lol:
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KahnTheRevelator wrote:Those are the sleaziest lyrics ever. :lol: I wanna rail your friend but when you get back I can rail you too. :lol:
good line, i might but that in there

btw, the 2nd girl who i wrote this about now i really dont like her at all.
For us living any other ways was nuts. with all the goodie-goodies working shitty jobs for bum pay checks, took the subway work and worried about their bills were dead. they were suckers, they had no balls. if we wanted something we just took it, and if anybody complained twice they got hit so hard believe me they never complained again
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Why write to a song that is already there? Be creative damnit. Write your own music.
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TaylorsBaby225 wrote:Why write to a song that is already there? Be creative damnit. Write your own music.
i had that rhtym stuck in my head so i decidedc to write lyrics to it
For us living any other ways was nuts. with all the goodie-goodies working shitty jobs for bum pay checks, took the subway work and worried about their bills were dead. they were suckers, they had no balls. if we wanted something we just took it, and if anybody complained twice they got hit so hard believe me they never complained again
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pretty weak honestly, i think you can do better
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wkpggrvn2001 wrote:pretty weak honestly, i think you can do better
why do you think i could do better? is it because you think that anyone could do better, or do you think i show promise but its just not that good?
For us living any other ways was nuts. with all the goodie-goodies working shitty jobs for bum pay checks, took the subway work and worried about their bills were dead. they were suckers, they had no balls. if we wanted something we just took it, and if anybody complained twice they got hit so hard believe me they never complained again
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