The First Day of My Life

mdel21 · Post by **mdel21** » Fri Jun 10, 2005 7:19 pm

http://s35.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3KBO ... W9T8J3EXCE

Listen to it. If it sucks, I apologize. If you like it, you're welcome.

i am sam2 · Post by **i am sam2** » Fri Jun 10, 2005 7:31 pm

holy shit those first/main chords are...damn that sounds almost exactly like a little progression i play sometimes...

voice sounds like the weezer guy...rivers is his name?

mdel21 · Post by **mdel21** » Fri Jun 10, 2005 7:34 pm

rivers cuomo

Beauford33 · Post by **Beauford33** » Fri Jun 10, 2005 8:36 pm

I personally like the strumming pattern on the original, but these works. Your voice struggles at times, but not too bad. Overall a good job, I really like this song and you did it justice.

mdel21 · Post by **mdel21** » Fri Jun 10, 2005 8:55 pm

I just kinda did it for fun. He fingerpicks and I'm just not good at it.

Beauford33 · Post by **Beauford33** » Fri Jun 10, 2005 8:56 pm

mdel21 wrote:I just kinda did it for fun. He fingerpicks and I'm just not good at it.

Well, just the rythm is different. More or less two step-ish.

whatshername · Post by **whatshername** » Tue Jun 14, 2005 2:10 pm

toppppppppp

and +1 post count

wow..i never thought i'd do that. i'm really bored today.

mdel21 · Post by **mdel21** » Tue Jun 14, 2005 2:10 pm

did you ever listen to this yourself?

whatshername · Post by **whatshername** » Tue Jun 14, 2005 2:12 pm

yes sir, i like it. i think you've improved from your last cover that i've heard. no lie.

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Sat Jun 18, 2005 12:04 pm

expired...

mdel21 · Post by **mdel21** » Sat Jun 18, 2005 2:06 pm

look me up on AIM later if you want it.

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Sat Jun 18, 2005 3:54 pm

just got back, haven't been around

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Sun Jun 19, 2005 9:19 am

guitar was really good. good rhythm. voice needs to be worked on. it's not terrible but you were all over the place at times. good job though

thanks for hooking me up w/ the song

mdel21 · Post by **mdel21** » Sun Jun 19, 2005 9:33 am

I'm not much of a singer. I'm seeing a little progression over the last year, I mainly don't practice enough. Part of it is a mix of being scared to let loose and trying to hard to sound like the artist.

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Sun Jun 19, 2005 10:01 am

yea man. just practice. you have potential and your playing is already good and you can play and sing at the same time so you're over half way there.