Two Step cover (updated, yet again)

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Two Step cover (updated, yet again)

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Okay.. these two have the wrong rhythm:
Two Step (old version)
Two Step (new and hopefully improved version)

Is this the right rhythm for the song?
http://www.angelfire.com/falcon/bedurnd ... prhymn.mp3
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I think you did a pretty good job....vocals were solid (chorus is hard). Definately better than I could do..

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pretty nice job buddy, not perfect, but sung and played quite nicely...

on side note, the song was even better because your hammer avatar was dancing to the beat of the song! talk about clicking at just the right time :)
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Post by Trippin Hillbilly »

Hey that was pretty good......

There's just one thing, the strumming, you're not playing a two step rhythm, I think..
Try doubling your strums up, ehh...does that make sense? Think of....1,2 1,2 1,2

Listen to L@lc to see what I mean, if not let me know ill post an old recording...

I liked the vocals, very good man
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Post by mbgreen »

Good job on the vocs...its a hard one to sing. As miguel mentioned, the strumming is off a bit...you need to emphasize more beats. Just listen to a solo or d/t version and you'll be right as the mail. Good job on the whole...the songs a lot harder than most think.
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RE: Number of strums... whoops. Taking a listen to L@LC you're definitely right about that. I just tried to play it the right way while singing and I figured out why I play the song the way I do (i.e. the right way makes me fudge it up badly :D) Off to the practice woodshed. As a side question, can somebody recommend a good Dave solo show that I can get off of AntsMarching?
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Post by Bedurndurn »

Okay, new version available here.

Trippin, I'd appreciate it if you'd take a listen and tell me if I fixed it or not (and if I added any new f-ups :wink: )
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my first post in a very very long time...but
The strumming needs to be worked on still, but overall nice job though. I found out by tapping it out with my feet helped me keep the beat. I found that Two Step on The Lost Acoustics compilation is good to hear the strums.. i think at least.
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