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by Swede Tue Apr 05, 2005 8:55 am
i made the chorus a little different. hope you like it!
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by Appfro Tue Apr 05, 2005 11:33 am
i liked it. your english was fine. i love this song and you did a pretty good job on the cover. your vocals were too low but i'm pretty sure you record guitar and vocal at the same time so you can't do much about that.
Where are the falsettos???
those are my favorite part.
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by Swede Tue Apr 05, 2005 11:38 am
Appfro wrote: i liked it. your english was fine. i love this song and you did a pretty good job on the cover. your vocals were too low but i'm pretty sure you record guitar and vocal at the same time so you can't do much about that.
Where are the falsettos???
those are my favorite part.
haha thanks apps. yeah,, i recorded the vocals and guitar at the same time,, i dont have a strong voice so i couldn´t do the chorus!
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by fatjack Tue Apr 05, 2005 5:19 pm
i hate this song, but you did well
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by myxomatosis Tue Apr 05, 2005 9:26 pm
nice job again
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by mlb1399 Tue Apr 05, 2005 10:10 pm
English was fine. I thought you did a good job!
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by Swede Wed Apr 06, 2005 2:49 pm
fatjack wrote: i hate this song, but you did well
thank you Josh
and i´m glad you all liked it
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by c_tietze Sun Apr 10, 2005 2:14 am
Timing is off, but not too shabby.
I don't know if Coldpay is like "your band" but you sound a lot like Chris. Good stuff
Work on your timing and lose the verbage on the vocals.
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by MOE.PHISH Sun Apr 10, 2005 10:21 am
i dont listen to coldplay so this is the first time ive ever heard it, i dug it, i dont think your vocals were too low for the song, english was fine, your accent adds to it, all in all def nicely done 8)
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by borocks Sun Apr 10, 2005 1:10 pm
I liked although I missed the falsettos as Mitch said. your voice sounds nice somehow, make something out if it!
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by Swede Wed May 11, 2005 5:04 pm
TOP!
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by Machtimus Wed May 11, 2005 5:19 pm
those are my favorite part.
