another onnne from meeeee

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Mon Mar 21, 2005 10:39 pm

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i can send it if need be, but i went over last month and had to pay some money, so im watching myself now. 8)

onid41 · Post by **onid41** » Mon Mar 21, 2005 11:08 pm

i like it man..as usual
its a nice tune

fatjack · Post by **fatjack** » Mon Mar 21, 2005 11:09 pm

i liked that guitar riff, it reminded me a lot of an acoustic alchemy song

as for the vocals... ehhhhhhhhhhhhhh... you need some work. you are quickly ascending in pitch to get to the right note, and when you try to sustain it, you fall flat. work on breathing properly when you sing, it will help a lot

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Mon Mar 21, 2005 11:13 pm

fatjack wrote:i liked that guitar riff, it reminded me a lot of an acoustic alchemy song

as for the vocals... ehhhhhhhhhhhhhh... you need some work. you are quickly ascending in pitch to get to the right note, and when you try to sustain it, you fall flat. work on breathing properly when you sing, it will help a lot

yeah, definitely know what you're saying. i'm practicing still, and i've been singing alot lately. i find it hard for me to sing on a recording though, because its like solely my voice. i find it much easier to sing with a guitar. i just like mess myself up because i'm too focused on it. i just need to let go.

what acoustic alchemy song did it remind you of?

fatjack · Post by **fatjack** » Mon Mar 21, 2005 11:19 pm

dmbguitar718 wrote:
fatjack wrote:i liked that guitar riff, it reminded me a lot of an acoustic alchemy song

as for the vocals... ehhhhhhhhhhhhhh... you need some work. you are quickly ascending in pitch to get to the right note, and when you try to sustain it, you fall flat. work on breathing properly when you sing, it will help a lot
yeah, definitely know what you're saying. i'm practicing still, and i've been singing alot lately. i find it hard for me to sing on a recording though, because its like solely my voice. i find it much easier to sing with a guitar. i just like mess myself up because i'm too focused on it. i just need to let go.

what acoustic alchemy song did it remind you of?

it reminds me of road dogs

as for singing while recording: try recording your guitar (or preferably a piano) playing the melody and singing along to that, then just take that track off when you are done recording the vocals

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Mon Mar 21, 2005 11:22 pm

fatjack wrote:
dmbguitar718 wrote:
fatjack wrote:i liked that guitar riff, it reminded me a lot of an acoustic alchemy song

as for the vocals... ehhhhhhhhhhhhhh... you need some work. you are quickly ascending in pitch to get to the right note, and when you try to sustain it, you fall flat. work on breathing properly when you sing, it will help a lot
yeah, definitely know what you're saying. i'm practicing still, and i've been singing alot lately. i find it hard for me to sing on a recording though, because its like solely my voice. i find it much easier to sing with a guitar. i just like mess myself up because i'm too focused on it. i just need to let go.

what acoustic alchemy song did it remind you of?
it reminds me of road dogs

as for singing while recording: try recording your guitar (or preferably a piano) playing the melody and singing along to that, then just take that track off when you are done recording the vocals

no, i know. i do. i'm saying that i tend to sing better when i'm actually playing the guitar, not listening to it through headphones.

fatjack · Post by **fatjack** » Mon Mar 21, 2005 11:24 pm

dmbguitar718 wrote:
fatjack wrote:
dmbguitar718 wrote:
fatjack wrote:i liked that guitar riff, it reminded me a lot of an acoustic alchemy song

as for the vocals... ehhhhhhhhhhhhhh... you need some work. you are quickly ascending in pitch to get to the right note, and when you try to sustain it, you fall flat. work on breathing properly when you sing, it will help a lot
yeah, definitely know what you're saying. i'm practicing still, and i've been singing alot lately. i find it hard for me to sing on a recording though, because its like solely my voice. i find it much easier to sing with a guitar. i just like mess myself up because i'm too focused on it. i just need to let go.

what acoustic alchemy song did it remind you of?
it reminds me of road dogs

as for singing while recording: try recording your guitar (or preferably a piano) playing the melody and singing along to that, then just take that track off when you are done recording the vocals
no, i know. i do. i'm saying that i tend to sing better when i'm actually playing the guitar, not listening to it through headphones.

well then just record them both at the same time

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Mon Mar 21, 2005 11:31 pm

fatjack wrote:
dmbguitar718 wrote:
fatjack wrote:
dmbguitar718 wrote:
fatjack wrote:i liked that guitar riff, it reminded me a lot of an acoustic alchemy song

as for the vocals... ehhhhhhhhhhhhhh... you need some work. you are quickly ascending in pitch to get to the right note, and when you try to sustain it, you fall flat. work on breathing properly when you sing, it will help a lot
yeah, definitely know what you're saying. i'm practicing still, and i've been singing alot lately. i find it hard for me to sing on a recording though, because its like solely my voice. i find it much easier to sing with a guitar. i just like mess myself up because i'm too focused on it. i just need to let go.

what acoustic alchemy song did it remind you of?
it reminds me of road dogs

as for singing while recording: try recording your guitar (or preferably a piano) playing the melody and singing along to that, then just take that track off when you are done recording the vocals
no, i know. i do. i'm saying that i tend to sing better when i'm actually playing the guitar, not listening to it through headphones.
well then just record them both at the same time

i like to stereo mic my guitars and such, and the sound wouldn't quite be the same. i should do a few recordings like that though.

Jakis · Post by **Jakis** » Mon Mar 21, 2005 11:45 pm

Great song. Really enjoyed the guitar riff alot. Don't know much about singing as im learning myself..so will leave that up to those better informed.

Cheers,

Jake

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Mon Mar 21, 2005 11:56 pm

thanks for the comments ya'll. im going to take this down though, i have limited bandwith, and i have to work a bunch of stuff out.