Alcoholic Issues - NEW

Dheibs · Post by **Dheibs** » Fri Mar 11, 2005 6:50 pm

heres the song i wrote and recorded today.......please critique!

http://s24.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=22YD ... TQ5QUGIH4M

unifaller · Post by **unifaller** » Fri Mar 11, 2005 7:04 pm

some buzzing and pause problems in between chords, need to fret the chords better i think

You_Enjoy_Myself · Post by **You_Enjoy_Myself** » Fri Mar 11, 2005 8:55 pm

First of all, it sounds like the higher strings on your guitar may be a little out of tune. And like unifaller said, some of the chords are kinda buzzy and a little sloppy. Were you singing and playing this at the same time? Because sometimes it sounds like the lyrics aren't coming out all that smoothly, and it's like you're having trouble synchronizing them with the guitar. How long have you played? Keep it up, I wanna hear some more from you.

Dheibs · Post by **Dheibs** » Fri Mar 11, 2005 9:05 pm

ya i was playing and singing at the same time and sometimes i prolly got my mouth away from the mic....ya ive been playin for bout 2 years now...just got a Taylor 314ce...Thanks for the critiques

Dheibs · Post by **Dheibs** » Sat Mar 12, 2005 6:34 pm

anyone else please?

Beauford33 · Post by **Beauford33** » Sat Mar 12, 2005 6:40 pm

Your voice is a bit too monotone. Add some cresendo's in longer notes. Nothing too outrageous, but it can livin things up. A little more air support when you sing. More controled diaphram and let the air flow.