New Original: Solitude

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Wow man, you have talent is all I can say. Good job. All I can say is that this song sounds like bongos or congas would fit in perfectly.
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good stuff, some of your best stuff ive heard thus far
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Nice job! :thumbsup:

It must be great to be able to write stuff this good.
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Damn, i wish i could write something (much less play something) half this good. Seriously, pat, really well done. I am adding it to my mp3 player, and .... just wow.

might have to play it for my g/f....

good shit
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Gracias. I was messing around with it today and seeing what else I can do with the bridge. Hopefully I'll get something better down.
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dmbguitar718 wrote:Gracias. I was messing around with it today and seeing what else I can do with the bridge. Hopefully I'll get something better down.
i actually fooled around with an old song today, put in a lot of new techniques, twas fun
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fatjack wrote:
dmbguitar718 wrote:Gracias. I was messing around with it today and seeing what else I can do with the bridge. Hopefully I'll get something better down.
i actually fooled around with an old song today, put in a lot of new techniques, twas fun
Funny you say that, I jjjust did. Just came downstairs after a nostalgic jam session.
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annnnd a little top. :)
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pat for some reason it's taking for days to load. I hope I can try listening again later this evening.

the new site looks sweeeet! great job.
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amazing
don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this love's too good to last and i'm too old to dream

don't grow up too fast don't embrace the past
this life's too good to last and i'm too young to care

don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this life could be the last and we're too young to see
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pleasew tab this
don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this love's too good to last and i'm too old to dream

don't grow up too fast don't embrace the past
this life's too good to last and i'm too young to care

don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this life could be the last and we're too young to see
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Post by katie »

i love the way you drift off at the beginning lost in thought almost.

this is relaxing, really nice work you have here. makes me happy. = )
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Post by dmbguitar718 »

thanks guys. :)

sorry to top this again, but here's a tab:

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Pat McInnis
Solitude
Feb. 2005

Note the Gm tuning.

Intro
D---0---------------------0-------------------
Bb------2---------------------2---------------
G-----3---3--2--2h3--0------3---3--2--2h3--3--
D------------3--3------3-----------3--3----3--
G---3---------------------3-------------------
D------------3--3----1-------------3--3----1--

A:
D-------------------------------------------
Bb------------------------------------------
G---3------3--2------2--0------0--2------2--
D--------0----3----3---------3----3----3----
G---0--0------------------------------------
D-------------3--3------1--1------3--3------

B:
D-----------------------------------------------0--
Bb----------------------0--4----2h4p2p0--2--2------
G---3----3/10--7----7/5----------------------------
D--------------------------------------------------
G---0--0-------------------0--0--------------------
D--------------8--8----------------------3----3----

C:
D-----8p0---10--7p0--7/8p0-----------------------------\__Right handed tapping
Bb--------------------------7p0---7p0-5p0-4p0h2/4\2p0--/
G------------------------------------------------------
D------------------------------------------------------
G---------------------------3---3---------5------------\__left hand
D---5-----5-----3---3----------------------------------/

D:
This bass part consists of both hands tapping. I have labeled the right handed taps "R".
D-----------------------------<12>--------------------------<7>--\
Bb----------------------------<12>--------------------------<7>--|--Right handed tapped harmonics
G-----------------------------<12>--------------------------<7>--/
D---------------------------------------------------------------- Repeat
G----------------------------------------------------------------
D---3--5p0h3/5-0h3-5-5p0h3/5-0----3--5p0h3/5-0h3-5-5p0h3/5-0-----
       R           R R               R           R R

Structure:
Intro
A
B
A
B
C
D
C
A
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I like where it's going but there's one part of it that is making it horrible for me to listen to...it's easily remedied though and not so much a problem w/ the general structure...the way the rhythm is going, the ear naturally wants to hear bah, dah dah dah, bah, dah dah dah, bah...and you're just doing bah, dah dah, bah, dah dah...if that makes sense...it could use another note in there...I think it'd make it much, much smoother...
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