What I Got cover PLZ CRIT

[JazzBassist114]

Check it out...
my first attempt at a cover...hope its decent
my voice isn't fantastic, but it'll do
i used my Applause AA21 and whatever mic and soundcard came w/ my computer

plz CRIT

http://www.angelfire.com/musicals/mattdiamondstone/

[You_Enjoy_Myself]

apparently your song hasn't been cleared yet by soundclick, so I can't listen.

[mangold]

god youre the worst person that ever lived

not cleared yet holmes. just put it on an angelfire page

edit: seriously fix it

[JazzBassist114]

all right, give it another go...

[Brock]

god youre the worst person that ever lived

not cleared yet holmes. just put it on an angelfire page

edit: seriously fix it

.....

get an attitude check.

[mangold]

god youre the worst person that ever lived

not cleared yet holmes. just put it on an angelfire page

edit: seriously fix it

.....

get an attitude check.

im just kiddin with him. hes a good friend of mine

the guitar seems a little fragmented in the begginning.
vocals need to be louder.
the 2nd guitar sounds good comin in.
we definetly playin this on the boardwalk this summer.
good work, better then i expected to be honest. but its painfully obvious you looped that main guitar part. cmon now cheater

[JazzBassist114]

god youre the worst person that ever lived

not cleared yet holmes. just put it on an angelfire page

edit: seriously fix it

.....

get an attitude check.

im just kiddin with him. hes a good friend of mine

the guitar seems a little fragmented in the begginning.
vocals need to be louder.
the 2nd guitar sounds good comin in.
we definetly playin this on the boardwalk this summer.
good work, better then i expected to be honest. but its painfully obvious you looped that main guitar part. cmon now cheater

not cheating, i'm just lazy. i could play it for 2 and a half minutes, but i chose not to...

[hmm69]

i liked it

[mangold]

god youre the worst person that ever lived

not cleared yet holmes. just put it on an angelfire page

edit: seriously fix it

.....

get an attitude check.

im just kiddin with him. hes a good friend of mine

the guitar seems a little fragmented in the begginning.
vocals need to be louder.
the 2nd guitar sounds good comin in.
we definetly playin this on the boardwalk this summer.
good work, better then i expected to be honest. but its painfully obvious you looped that main guitar part. cmon now cheater

not cheating, i'm just lazy. i could play it for 2 and a half minutes, but i chose not to...

thats cheating you cheater head. plus it sounds better with dynamic changes

[Tranman66]

exacttttly, dynamic changes are really important to flow

[mbgreen]

The looping kinda ruins it. Makes it sound like a midi sort of. Let your vocals go...you sound like you have a decent voice, but you're not really singing. More like talking. Good job with the solos and fills. Keep at it.

[JazzBassist114]

Listening to it a second time, i agree with you guys on the whole looping thing. it definitely needs changed. this recording, tho, was more to get my voice out there, cuz i'm not sure if its good or not. i think its borderline, some say its good, some say its bad. thanx for the crit, keep it up!

[jellyfish]

Without reading other comments I will post mine.

Vocals = You can sing, so Sing! Don't sing the song by speaking the lyrics. They are also a bit low, but that will be fixed when you actually sing.

Guitar = Something was a littlw off on the verse (the repeating part)

I liked the fills & solos.

I give ya a DMBTABS # 7

[JazzBassist114]

sweet...thnx man