It sounds like it needs some more practice. It's not very "tight" as they say in the biz. The back up vocals didn't help the overall sound...as the timing was off, and (the back up vocals) were too loud.
You're singing with lots of emotion, possibly flying a little too loose though. Perhaps you could turn up the main vocal mic, get a bit closer to the mic, and sing with a bit more control.
This recording was a fun listen, but I can't really imagine myself listening to it again. I hope this isn't too honest.
AdamCU81 wrote:It sounds like it needs some more practice. It's not very "tight" as they say in the biz. The back up vocals didn't help the overall sound...as the timing was off, and (the back up vocals) were too loud.
You're singing with lots of emotion, possibly flying a little too loose though. Perhaps you could turn up the main vocal mic, get a bit closer to the mic, and sing with a bit more control.
This recording was a fun listen, but I can't really imagine myself listening to it again. I hope this isn't too honest.
No, it isn't I know exactly what you are talking about...
#41 is such a great song, that there's hardly a chance to come close with a band version. Additionally, it's a god damn garage band recording. I know it's not worth listening too again cuz you're likely to have the original song handy
JamesMatthews wrote:Overall it's good.
Your chorist sucks... Your voice needs less punk style in it...
And a little advice : Tune your guitars before playin...
Overall I wasn't too impressed...they are right less punk in your voice and please tune your guitars...u play the song well just need to be in tune....The srummer was very distracting lost time a bunch of times...Try listening to the intro to #41 on the crash album for the intro...Good start
IM not hearing the punk thing ya'll are talking about. IN fact his voice has no punk elements at all. Have you ever thought that this was his natural voice. Not bad but needs work. Yeah, the guitars were a bit off tuning wise. Nowhere near as bad as they have criticized you.
I would really only critize ya'll on the out of tune guitars. And tighteb up the drums a bit.
And for you JAMES MATTHEWS. You have alot of energy which is OK but not throughout every note through every song you play. I actually think this guys voice is much better suited for Dave than yours. In the future I wouldn't be such a dick to your peers. Yes, your comments were rather rude.
Jellyfish you're right, it IS my natural voice. I try to avoid adjusting it, sometimes it doesn't work, but in this case, I don't think I emulated Dave or a certain punk singer.
However, I'm perfectly aware of our shitty tuning and the occasional slips of our drunk drummer
As for James Matthews, I don't take him too serious either, no offence man.