Original: Sunday Afternoon

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Original: Sunday Afternoon

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Hi everyone

This is one of my first original songs. I thought I'd post it so you can have a listen if you like. Please note that I'm not a native English speaker, so the lyrics might be crap IYO...

Drop me a short line or something. Any comment would be appreciated.

Bo

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Post by eliot1171 »

Good job. I like the guitar parts a lot. As for the singing, you have a great voice for that song. Don't worry about dialects, no one care's...It makes singers unique. I thought the lyrics were solid.
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Who cares if you dont sound american/english. Your influence does you good. I like the melody. THis is pretty good. Damm nice guitar and tone. I like it a lot.
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