Two Step cover

TheLastDodoBird · Post by **TheLastDodoBird** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 10:25 pm

Alright, so I've been working on this cover for a while now. But what I really need help on is vocals. The guitar part (though not exactly how Dave does it) is how I want it to be, as I want to incorporate my own style into it and all, but the vocals is where I need all the suggestions I can get...

http://www.angelfire.com/band2/lastdodo ... _Step2.mp3

So, I need your criticisms! Please don't post if you're just posting "you suck"... "you suck and here's why" is fine by me... but make it constructive

Thanks in advance.

*sorry* keep in mind that I'm not even going out of a mic here and the quality of the recording is awful...
*also* no remote linking shazbot, just copy/paste the link please

fenster1977 · Post by **fenster1977** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 10:40 pm

linky no worky

same thing happened to me the other day.

angelfire just changed their server...you can't direct link to files, people have to get it off your personal webpage

sucks...but that's the way it is now

onid41 · Post by **onid41** » Thu Jan 13, 2005 12:15 am

right click -> save target as

you sound like me when i play

but overall it was ok

dmbinsa · Post by **dmbinsa** » Thu Jan 13, 2005 4:09 pm

guitar work is good, you sound like your not letting go and really singing, more like talking, overall not bad

Kukini · Post by **Kukini** » Thu Jan 13, 2005 7:03 pm

not really singing... the guitar is done well though.