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just played around with some stuff. tell me what you think.
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Post by eliot1171 »

It’s not very complicated but I think that’s why I like it. It’s very mellow and with the right vocals and a little more variation, you’ve got yourself a good song.
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I agree completley with eliot.. are you planning to put it vocals?
Ya, it definitley needs one more part for variation, but its got alot of potential.. very full and soothing sounding.
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haha yea martin dc-1e love it
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i'm hoping to put lyrics with it but nothing has come to me, writers block
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