11th Hour By Firedancer86 ( listen! )

superman0710 · Post by **superman0710** » Mon Dec 02, 2002 11:57 pm

very cool stuff, especially the breakdown where it slows down

enjoy

(8.04 MB) http://www.rampromotions.com/11hour.mp3

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Xoosh · Post by **Xoosh** » Wed Dec 04, 2002 2:20 pm

Quit the flaming or i start banning =(

regards,
XoOsh

gcom007 · Post by **gcom007** » Wed Dec 04, 2002 2:24 pm

Xoosh wrote:Quit the flaming or i start banning =(

regards,
XoOsh

who is this referring to?

Xoosh · Post by **Xoosh** » Wed Dec 04, 2002 2:27 pm

I cant remember, i just deleted all the posts. For the record, we're allowed to share music on the board. I ask that you all are cool with each other ... or else the community turns into one stupid negative bash party... which isnt fun and will make the quality people turn away. Im going to speak with Kanter about revising the setup of the board to a much simpler setup instead of having like 12 different boards on here... making it like 5... we'll see... becuase i for one would probably only post in here becuase it's one of the most trafficked parts of the site.

/x

ticohans · Post by **ticohans** » Thu Dec 05, 2002 1:16 am

hey fire, here's my constructive criticism for your 11hour. Although it's not my style, there are some great core ideas here. But I don't think it would hurt if you changed it up just a little during the repeats. Something to provide variation. A kink in the rhythm, a different bend in the lick, something to add just a touch more spice. I agree with superman that it works better as it goes on and you change it up a little more. It could be a little fuller too, as throughout most of it, you have both the guitar and bass moving through fairly involved melodic lines. it needs a good rhythm guitar. the drums could also change it up a bit more. make it unpredictable.

these are all tweaking issues. like I said earlier, some great core ideas that just need a little more flushing out I think. hope I haven't been too harsh.

MattyTrane · Post by **MattyTrane** » Thu Dec 05, 2002 9:23 am

yea and cool song has something different and spectacular, thats what you have to get in this one, make it so that i wont be able to get the song out of my head.

firedancer86 · Post by **firedancer86** » Thu Dec 05, 2002 12:21 pm

6StringSamurai wrote:yea and cool song has something different and spectacular, thats what you have to get in this one, make it so that i wont be able to get the song out of my head.

you mean a hook?

And I can't make the drums any better...they came from a stinkin' casio!

Its PROG...thats why it changes aand goes though different fazes...I basicly wanted to erite something with basic guitar and a catchy bass line (the bass was played from my les paul) that keeps running...If I did anything eldse to the rythm, it would be a clash of sounds...

And as for the "change-up", thats why the intro/main riff has the "high" on the neck 3 chords...(listen to the intro

Butthanks for listening and you 2 cents

MattyTrane · Post by **MattyTrane** » Thu Dec 05, 2002 6:10 pm

i mean what i said...

firedancer86 · Post by **firedancer86** » Thu Dec 05, 2002 6:13 pm

6StringSamurai wrote:i mean what i said...

Yeah, often times it is reffered to as a "hook"

MattyTrane · Post by **MattyTrane** » Thu Dec 05, 2002 6:22 pm

thats great, i still mean what i said

gravedigger · Post by **gravedigger** » Thu Dec 05, 2002 6:24 pm

6StringSamurai wrote:thats great, i still mean what i said

are you trying to say that what you said was what you meant?

I'm confused.

MattyTrane · Post by **MattyTrane** » Thu Dec 05, 2002 6:26 pm

grrrrrrrrr lol

firedancer86 · Post by **firedancer86** » Thu Dec 05, 2002 6:26 pm

6StringSamurai wrote:thats great, i still mean what i said

Sorry...just trying to add something extra to try and understand if thats what you ment...

MattyTrane · Post by **MattyTrane** » Thu Dec 05, 2002 6:27 pm

you understood just fine

firedancer86 · Post by **firedancer86** » Thu Dec 05, 2002 6:28 pm