an idea, no vocal, black tsunami

Tranman66 · Post by **Tranman66** » Mon Jan 03, 2005 4:00 pm

This is just an idea clip. i wanna write a song for those who died in the tsunamis, so i'd tittle this, "Black Tsunami". well, this is an idea. Tell me if i should go on.

this is not well played cuz i just thought of it.

sorry about the long intro. THe song starts at 0:50 lol.

and the link
http://s7.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1UJ3O ... AEALU74IF8

jaroben · Post by **jaroben** » Mon Jan 03, 2005 5:03 pm

not a bad idea. needs a little work. use a metronome, your timing is off. also your guitar was out of tune.

MWR · Post by **MWR** » Mon Jan 03, 2005 5:33 pm

This is a rough piece of a song.
I really can't give you advice on this because it isn't anything yet. Try and put more time/effort into it or at least have a complete thought before sharing. You didn't even take the time to tune your guitar.

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Mon Jan 03, 2005 6:17 pm

sounds icky in the beggining. it gets better when you start strumming. still needs alot of work.

Tranman66 · Post by **Tranman66** » Mon Jan 03, 2005 6:17 pm

ok i'll work on it. I'll post the final product when i am done. should be a few weeks, school is hell.

thanks. good day.