Original "Falling Asleep"

gumbomadness · Post by **gumbomadness** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 12:06 am

Its boring. I know.
Thats why itscalled what it is.
Its my first try with my new PLUG IN GUITAR TO COMPUTER ADAPTER instead of cheapass mic.
And my first try with COOL EDIT! ^_^

::beams::

Go listen and critique.
http://www.purevolume.com/seepersaud

Its called Falling Asleep

Tranman66 · Post by **Tranman66** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 12:09 am

very smooth man. I do like your jazz style lead very much. nice nice lead. good flow too. you;re full of potential for sure. i'd love you more if you get rid of that annoying picture #_#

gumbomadness · Post by **gumbomadness** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 12:12 am

Tranman66 wrote:very smooth man. I do like your jazz style lead very much. nice nice lead. good flow too. you;re full of potential for sure. i'd love you more if you get rid of that annoying picture #_#

and FINISH IT!

thanks dawg.
Finish what?
(ill think about moving my dear snape)

Tranman66 · Post by **Tranman66** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 12:14 am

ah nvm, somehow the first time i listened to it, the song only lasted 60 secs

gumbomadness · Post by **gumbomadness** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 12:16 am

lmao.. its like exactly 3:00

gumbomadness · Post by **gumbomadness** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 1:36 am

snape is gone. ::cringes::

You_Enjoy_Myself · Post by **You_Enjoy_Myself** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 9:50 am

gumbomadness wrote:snape is gone. ::cringes::

a1075dd63aa12 · Post by **a1075dd63aa12** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 1:12 pm

i like it a lot, very mellow, i like how you fit the leads in there without it being overkill, it works together nicely, are you thinking about adding lyrics to it?

gumbomadness · Post by **gumbomadness** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 1:12 pm

You_Enjoy_Myself wrote:
gumbomadness wrote:snape is gone. ::cringes::

it hurts me...
now critique!

You_Enjoy_Myself · Post by **You_Enjoy_Myself** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 1:18 pm

gumbomadness wrote:
You_Enjoy_Myself wrote:
gumbomadness wrote:snape is gone. ::cringes::

it hurts me...
now critique!

Ok, I listened, and I likey. It had a nice smooth flow to it, and had some nice melodic lead in there too. I thought that it sounded quite similar to Green Carpet, or whatever your other song was called. Overall, good job, I'd like to hear more of your stuff.

gumbomadness · Post by **gumbomadness** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 1:40 pm

wkpggrvn2001 wrote:i like it a lot, very mellow, i like how you fit the leads in there without it being overkill, it works together nicely, are you thinking about adding lyrics to it?

i dont do sing...

thanks.!

gumbomadness · Post by **gumbomadness** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 1:41 pm

You_Enjoy_Myself wrote:
gumbomadness wrote:
You_Enjoy_Myself wrote:
gumbomadness wrote:snape is gone. ::cringes::

it hurts me...
now critique!
Ok, I listened, and I likey. It had a nice smooth flow to it, and had some nice melodic lead in there too. I thought that it sounded quite similar to Green Carpet, or whatever your other song was called. Overall, good job, I'd like to hear more of your stuff.

thanks man.. it is a little similar. my next song is way different. it will be up in a few days. ^_^

a1075dd63aa12 · Post by **a1075dd63aa12** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 1:47 pm

gumbomadness wrote:
wkpggrvn2001 wrote:i like it a lot, very mellow, i like how you fit the leads in there without it being overkill, it works together nicely, are you thinking about adding lyrics to it?
i dont do sing...
thanks.!

it sounds fine instrumental, it might be interesting to try to get someone to put vocals on it possibly

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Sun Jan 02, 2005 8:19 am

i tried for half an hour to get your song to download but my internet sucked and now i'm out of time. i promise to come back eventually and listen to it.

i'm not one of those guys that just post recordings and never listen to anyone else's and i appreciate all your comments on my songs. i will be back.

gumbomadness · Post by **gumbomadness** » Sun Jan 02, 2005 1:31 pm

Appsoldier wrote:i tried for half an hour to get your song to download but my internet sucked and now i'm out of time. i promise to come back eventually and listen to it.

i'm not one of those guys that just post recordings and never listen to anyone else's and i appreciate all your comments on my songs. i will be back.

^_^ youre a good man charlie brown.