A progression i messed around with

a1075dd63aa12 · Post by **a1075dd63aa12** » Wed Dec 29, 2004 1:59 pm

this is the first time ive posted a song on here, it was something ive been messing around with critique as much as possible, it has no lyrics to this point

please, review this ive never played any of my own stuff for anyone, so all of the feed back i can get would be great, everyone just wants to hear cover stuff when i play and i want to see what people think of stuff i make

http://www.soundclick.com/util/Streamm3 ... 27538&q=hi

jaroben · Post by **jaroben** » Wed Dec 29, 2004 3:50 pm

nice job... i liked the sound of it. chorus was good.
it seemed a little repetitive... not a bad thing, since most songs are.. maybe throw in pre-chorus and a solo, that would spice it up a bit.

a1075dd63aa12 · Post by **a1075dd63aa12** » Wed Dec 29, 2004 4:52 pm

cool thanks for the review, im sure if i had lyrics, it would break up the monotony a little bit, i added the breakdown at the end hoping that would help it a little

gumbomadness · Post by **gumbomadness** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 12:58 am

sounds like you have a metronome in it .
::click click click click::

gumbomadness · Post by **gumbomadness** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 12:58 am

oh.. ya, but i like it ^_^

deceptivehero · Post by **deceptivehero** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 3:07 am

cool progression I like the sound of those chords, my progressions suck.

DMBFan63 · Post by **DMBFan63** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 3:30 am

I hear that gumbo..it definetly sounds like a metronome.. did you use one?

a1075dd63aa12 · Post by **a1075dd63aa12** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 1:03 pm

DMBFan63 wrote:I hear that gumbo..it definetly sounds like a metronome.. did you use one?

no its the bongos, i need to mess around with the volumes that recording is really canny, i havent messed with the volume or anything yet