Howie Day Cover (Collide)

coldblueice41 · Post by **coldblueice41** » Tue Dec 28, 2004 6:43 pm

My cover of collide by howie day.

http://s15.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=10O7 ... Y9HGKJ85U5
http://s15.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3I8B ... YE0CI2BKD9

EDIT: new links (clear recording)

http://s19.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1JD1 ... 7PMQRFMZL4
http://s19.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=04QS ... HSHBDOOELT

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Tue Dec 28, 2004 9:02 pm

i comment in order of my thoughts...

eww static
good guitar
good voice
eh ok voice
i should listen to more howie day
he sings the chorus pretty good
i saw him play this on carson
HE MULITIPLIED! OH SHIT!
that was scary
NOT AGAIN!
it was less scary this time cause it was expected
oh only 2 posts
i should welcome him to Dmbtabs
oh its over
that was good

that was overall pretty good. id like to hear it without the static.

dmbtabs welcome to it!

Tranman66 · Post by **Tranman66** » Tue Dec 28, 2004 9:08 pm

statics? sound like a hell of treble to me.

nice man, steady. good.

chorus can still use a little work
especially the last lines.

coldblueice41 · Post by **coldblueice41** » Tue Dec 28, 2004 9:16 pm

yeah, I'm working on the static. When I transfered from the recorder to the computer it came out with a bunch but I should have that fixed soon, and I took out the voice layers, so check back in a little bit

coldblueice41 · Post by **coldblueice41** » Tue Dec 28, 2004 9:54 pm

http://s19.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1JD1 ... 7PMQRFMZL4
http://s19.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=04QS ... HSHBDOOELT

the new links sound muuuuuuuuuuch better

Tranman66 · Post by **Tranman66** » Tue Dec 28, 2004 10:31 pm

a lil better, but still a hell of treb. nice guitar tho.

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Wed Dec 29, 2004 3:38 pm

this one's better than the bartender cover imo. good guitar playing. you definetly got that. you have good vocals, they just need a little work. you're holding back for one, and it's a bit nasaley (sp?)
it sounds like you lose beat just a little during the bridge, but not bad. nothing a tap of the foot can't fix.
a lot better. good job, just work on singing more from your diaphragm and less from your sinuses. good luck.

don't worry about recording quality, as long as you can hear it, it's good enough. no one here's expecting cd quality from computer mics.

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Fri Dec 31, 2004 1:01 pm

what tab did you use?

edit: nvm, i didnt notice the whole "capo 4" in the tab that i found. that makes a difference!

martinstud17 · Post by **martinstud17** » Fri Dec 31, 2004 1:16 pm

sounds good man