In You > new original

firedancer86 · Post by **firedancer86** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:18 pm

progress in work people...I just made it up and improved the whole secong track from nothing...maybe some sour notes, but I plan on writing lyrics to it...the secong guitar in the "chorus" (if you will) is what I have for a vocal melody...already have some lyrics...tell me what you think...I would love to spiffy it up...add some more jammin' delay, and add some bongos and give it a real nic3e acoustic feel...if you havea second, drop a comment by...

http://www.cadenzaspell.com/inyou.mp3

Pickles · Post by **Pickles** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:19 pm

wow man.... really pretty... very mellow.. what are your thoughts on the lyrics?

firedancer86 · Post by **firedancer86** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:22 pm

thought ?(sorry..AIM is giving me REAL problems

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Pickles · Post by **Pickles** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:24 pm

what lyrics do you have already

firedancer86 · Post by **firedancer86** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:25 pm

shane wrote:what lyrics do you have already

you'll know em when you hear em'

fatjack · Post by **fatjack** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:29 pm

that is one of the most beautiful songs i've ever heard. sounds like a song you listen to while staring at the sky and laying next to your girlfriend (now if only had one...

). anyway good job once again.

btw, i've finally discovered the IUMA, so hopefully you might have some competition around here real soon

firedancer86 · Post by **firedancer86** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:34 pm

sounds good man...

thanks for the comments...

The Man of The Hour · Post by **The Man of The Hour** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:43 pm

Very , very beautiful. One of the best improve jams I've heard, keep it up

Trippin Hillbilly · Post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:55 pm

Damn fire.....thats so sweet, i've listened to it a few times now.
Incredible......there were a few sour notes every now and then but I guess you were just feelin your way around....damn, sounds amazing.

You should definately add some lyrics to this, it kinda reminds me of a song that would be on a show like dawson's creek..........hope that doesn't piss you off.. Meant in a good way

Great stuff fire!!

juineaux · Post by **juineaux** » Tue Jul 08, 2003 12:52 am

i like it

i think the bongos or a djembe would be a great addition. I would make them pretty driving instead of just in the backround. The guitars can go slow while the beat just keeps churning. I like the cool little melody and the rolling bass line thing you do when you get into it.
Do you ever listen to micheal hedges?
i could see you playing that type of music(micheal hedges style), very melodic and rythmic at the same time. anyways great work cant wait to hear more.

longleggedfrog · Post by **longleggedfrog** » Tue Jul 08, 2003 7:51 am

Great job, I really enjoyed listening to it. It was very story like, if that makes sense. Good luck with the lyrics.

foxymophandlemama · Post by **foxymophandlemama** » Tue Jul 08, 2003 8:22 am

[quote="fatjack"]that is one of the most beautiful songs i've ever heard. sounds like a song you listen to while staring at the sky and laying next to your girlfriend (now if only had one...

)]

I have to agree with Fatjack...Except make that boyfriend in my case...

really awesome song...

Good JOB!!!

barcode · Post by **barcode** » Tue Jul 08, 2003 8:50 am

what type of guitar(s) are you playing? (sounds awesome by the way!)

VTDreaminwithDMB · Post by **VTDreaminwithDMB** » Tue Jul 08, 2003 9:07 am

Man, that is great stuff. Judging from the posts on here you have already made a connection with peoples emotions. With some good lyrics that song will be complete.

Roastbeef · Post by **Roastbeef** » Tue Jul 08, 2003 10:00 am

Very cool. I like it a lot. I'm sure vocals will make it really great, especially considering your voice. Can't wait!