new song from my band

seanbryantkbq · Post by **seanbryantkbq** » Mon Dec 06, 2004 4:58 pm

tell me waht u think

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/profe ... kmusic.htm

its called today and heres the lyrics

Woke up today
My heart may be broken in a thousand ways
But today
My hands play cards different ways
Like some little lovely girl
Take your breath away, all away

Today, mmm day
Pink hats under cloudless skies
Today, mmm day
Wake up a beautiful way
Today, mmm day
Lovely up a different girl
Today… it’s a new day

All the things
Next to you I think were playing
Different games
Walk off now all by ourselves
To desecrate
All the life that’s before this day
I say, intimate you and I today

Today, mmm day
Pink hats under cloudless skies
Today, mmm day
Wake up a beautiful way
Today, mmm day
Lovely up a different girl
Today… it’s a new day

Today I found a lovely girl
Today I found the time
Who’s the one I got so high?
And stop me on a dime

She got me
Oh so gone off all the feelings
Kissing
On the lips and then all over
Reeling
From the time oh that we share
Today, I am so gone with my baby

Today, mmm day
Pink hats under cloudless skies
Today, mmm day
Wake up a beautiful way
Today, mmm day
Lovely up a different girl
Today… it’s a new day

Sciaracastro · Post by **Sciaracastro** » Mon Dec 06, 2004 5:10 pm

I like the way the song is played...but i dont like the singer at all!
Good job anyway

Tranman66 · Post by **Tranman66** » Mon Dec 06, 2004 5:49 pm

singing has a punk feel and still need a little practice. the bass seems really messed up and out of time. Guitar is good, drums seem to be out of rhythm at times. everything doesnt blend at parts, but overall, keep posting!

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Mon Dec 06, 2004 6:25 pm

not bad, im not a huge fan of the way its sung, but thats an opinion thing

Dutch · Post by **Dutch** » Mon Dec 06, 2004 7:40 pm

kind of reminds me of an oar type song only without the strong vocals/ lead guitar/ saxaphone but you know what i mean. work on the vocals a bit and i think youve got somethin pretty good

You_Enjoy_Myself · Post by **You_Enjoy_Myself** » Mon Dec 06, 2004 7:59 pm

Sounds good, needs to be a bit tighter, and the vocals should be sung more, and yelled less. Also look at getting a popper stopper for your mic.

Trippin Hillbilly · Post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Mon Dec 06, 2004 8:05 pm

Pretty cool.. The chorus is pretty catchy. I agree that you need a pop filter and maybe work on hitting some of the notes but it has lots of potential. The vocal melody is cool.

The guitar kinda reminds me of joy ride at times though.

seanbryantkbq · Post by **seanbryantkbq** » Mon Dec 06, 2004 9:58 pm

thanks guys, exaclty how should i sing the vocals more and scream less? should i falsetto some more? aslo, what would help to make my vocals stronger? anyone have any excercises?

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Tue Dec 07, 2004 2:29 pm

seanbryantkbq wrote:thanks guys, exaclty how should i sing the vocals more and scream less? should i falsetto some more? aslo, what would help to make my vocals stronger? anyone have any excercises?

dont falsetto more, the only falsettos ive heard that i like are those airy dave pitches... heaven

Dutch · Post by **Dutch** » Tue Dec 07, 2004 5:09 pm

i actually didnt mind the vocals that much, they werent too bad. maybe try singing more fromt he gut to get more oomph behind it. then again, this is comin froma guy who cant really sing himself

Trippin Hillbilly · Post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Tue Dec 07, 2004 6:26 pm

praisedave wrote:
seanbryantkbq wrote:thanks guys, exaclty how should i sing the vocals more and scream less? should i falsetto some more? aslo, what would help to make my vocals stronger? anyone have any excercises?
dont falsetto more, the only falsettos ive heard that i like are those airy dave pitches... heaven

you should listen to some radohead or jeff buckley or coldplay or damien rice or any decent singers....

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Tue Dec 07, 2004 6:28 pm

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:
praisedave wrote:
seanbryantkbq wrote:thanks guys, exaclty how should i sing the vocals more and scream less? should i falsetto some more? aslo, what would help to make my vocals stronger? anyone have any excercises?
dont falsetto more, the only falsettos ive heard that i like are those airy dave pitches... heaven
you should listen to some radohead or jeff buckley or coldplay or damien rice or any decent singers....

i listen to coldplay and rice... they're not bad either... radiohead is too mellow for me and ive not heard this jeff buckley fellow..

seanbryantkbq · Post by **seanbryantkbq** » Tue Dec 07, 2004 6:30 pm

ive been doin some excersise for my voice to make it have more umph

anything else?

Raif2032 · Post by **Raif2032** » Wed Dec 08, 2004 2:23 am

praisedave wrote: i listen to coldplay and rice... they're not bad either... radiohead is too mellow for me and ive not heard this jeff buckley fellow..

Blasphemy!!! Download "sketches for my sweetheart the drunk" or anything from him off of iTunes RIGHT NOW.

You'll appreciate music more.

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Wed Dec 08, 2004 2:28 pm

Raif2032 wrote:
praisedave wrote: i listen to coldplay and rice... they're not bad either... radiohead is too mellow for me and ive not heard this jeff buckley fellow..

Blasphemy!!! Download "sketches for my sweetheart the drunk" or anything from him off of iTunes RIGHT NOW.

You'll appreciate music more.

will do ma man... i dont know what ituens is i use singingfish