new original-rust and bones

juineaux · Post by **juineaux** » Sat Dec 04, 2004 3:08 am

I wrote a new song that I'm pretty proud of, it has some ideas and sounds that I dont ussauly use. Tell me what you think-

http://s94451478.onlinehome.us/rustandbones.mp3

AdamCU81 · Post by **AdamCU81** » Sat Dec 04, 2004 6:09 am

This is badass. The introduction of each timbre hightens anticipation of what's around the next turn. The vocals' mellow roughness is almost too honest (good), but they sometimes make words hard to understand (which is cool).

If I were going to make one change, I would try playing the piano part in a lower octave, or turn the volume down on it so it's not so prominent.

Tranman66 · Post by **Tranman66** » Sat Dec 04, 2004 10:30 am

Wow, i love your voice! you sound like John Mayall! the guitar sounds like John Mayall too! sweeett. with a slide, you'll turn into the awesome mayall. Great work man. I am a big fan of this kind of music. You're recreating an awesome style. 9.5/10!

Trippin Hillbilly · Post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Sat Dec 04, 2004 10:38 am

Wow, there's not much you can critique about that. Really impressive. I would say thats your best yet. The bass made me smile when it came in. It was perfect.

mdel21 · Post by **mdel21** » Sat Dec 04, 2004 10:50 am

this song kicks ass

mdel21 · Post by **mdel21** » Sat Dec 04, 2004 10:55 am

my mom said it was interesting

jeffro · Post by **jeffro** » Sat Dec 04, 2004 11:55 am

Excellent! It kinda reminded me of John Butler Trio, but I prefer your voice. Guitar work great, Bass Great, little bits of percussion fit in perfect, but I do agree with AdamCU81 about the piano part. Great work!

juineaux · Post by **juineaux** » Sat Dec 04, 2004 1:42 pm

mdel21 wrote:my mom said it was interesting

I hope thats a good thing...

Thanks for the reviews guys. I will pull down the piano sound(actaully its two electric guitars, one hitting a high D another hitting a high E, to make for some evil dissonance, but it ends up sounding like a piano).

mdel21 · Post by **mdel21** » Sat Dec 04, 2004 1:54 pm

I'll have my dad listen to it and give his take. But I like it. When are you making a CD?

juineaux · Post by **juineaux** » Sat Dec 04, 2004 1:58 pm

I finnished it yesterday, this is on it. I'm gonna get some copies printed off by January.

You_Enjoy_Myself · Post by **You_Enjoy_Myself** » Sat Dec 04, 2004 2:07 pm

Beautiful work again juineaux, I hope you don't mind me comparing you to KJP again

, but I was heavily reminded of his music again. This song is going on my playlist right now, I loved it. Keep up the great work.

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Sat Dec 04, 2004 2:43 pm

that is amazing, one of the best things ive heard on these boards. the only thing i could possibly say is that you should make the lyrics clearer. i had problems hearin what you were singin. thats incredible tho man keep it up.

Ryeguy · Post by **Ryeguy** » Sat Dec 04, 2004 2:57 pm

whoa, very very original. your voice slightly reminds me of Ben Harper. That was wicked awesome man..

deceptivehero · Post by **deceptivehero** » Sat Dec 04, 2004 3:39 pm

that was killer. Its found a place on my play list, Id be interested in a cd too.

gumbomadness · Post by **gumbomadness** » Sat Dec 04, 2004 3:41 pm

damn man. that was excellent. i really really like the guitar part.