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Matty Boom · Post by **Matty Boom** » Tue Nov 23, 2004 12:49 pm

woo hoo...i did 'gone' by jack johnson and the album version is pretty bass driven, so i put some bass on this and laid down a solo in the middle there too

if you wouldn't mind...let me know what you think of the voice and the solo...and the track in general...thanks ya'll!!

http://mmasarik.dmbtabs.com/gone.mp3

YouNeverNo41 · Post by **YouNeverNo41** » Tue Nov 23, 2004 1:58 pm

I really like it. I like how its nice and simple and guitar isn't too busy. The vocals are very good, slightly off at times...but overall you get a A-

Matty Boom · Post by **Matty Boom** » Tue Nov 23, 2004 10:14 pm

anybody else listen or do i suck again?

Swe dmbfan · Post by **Swe dmbfan** » Tue Nov 23, 2004 10:18 pm

it was really good matty!

dude, i would love to hear you play cookie jar

skpr41 · Post by **skpr41** » Wed Nov 24, 2004 11:50 am

really good job matty. great solo. you've come along way since your aatw soloing effort awhile back.

the only constructive criticism i can think of is the vocals were a little shaky at times and it could flow a little better. also it would be really nice to hear a bit more emotion in your vocals too.

the great thing is overall you're getting better every time.

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Wed Nov 24, 2004 12:38 pm

thats a good song ma man... you are REALLY good at writing lyrics. you should replace "removable things" with "temporary things" in my opinion.

your vocals continue to improve stick with it

bassman462 · Post by **bassman462** » Wed Nov 24, 2004 12:41 pm

good man nice solo A.

Trippin Hillbilly · Post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Wed Nov 24, 2004 2:40 pm

praisedave wrote:thats a good song ma man... you are REALLY good at writing lyrics. you should replace "removable things" with "temporary things" in my opinion.

your vocals continue to improve stick with it

it's a cover..

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Wed Nov 24, 2004 4:26 pm

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:
praisedave wrote:thats a good song ma man... you are REALLY good at writing lyrics. you should replace "removable things" with "temporary things" in my opinion.

your vocals continue to improve stick with it
it's a cover..

heh heh.... i knew that... well he is good at writing lyrics he had an original on here before with good lyrics.

Trippin Hillbilly · Post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Wed Nov 24, 2004 5:16 pm

praisedave wrote:
Trippin Hillbilly wrote:
praisedave wrote:thats a good song ma man... you are REALLY good at writing lyrics. you should replace "removable things" with "temporary things" in my opinion.

your vocals continue to improve stick with it
it's a cover..

heh heh.... i knew that... well he is good at writing lyrics he had an original on here before with good lyrics.

That is true. Nice cover Matty, in the beginning it sounded exactly like the original. Bitchin solo too.

whatshername · Post by **whatshername** » Thu Nov 25, 2004 12:31 am

i'm topping this. sorry it took me a little while to get to matty! wonderful job..i LOVE IT

katie · Post by **katie** » Thu Nov 25, 2004 4:42 am

how did you know I've been diggin on jack johnson lately! great groove.

the style really suits your voice. I like listening to it, makes me smile...

love the lazy faire feel to it all.

the solo is solid and makes me want to be in a hula skirt.

way to multitrack matty, I'm envious. I like your voice.

MWR · Post by **MWR** » Sun Nov 28, 2004 10:14 pm

Another one I didnt get to but I'm topping it so you can forgive me.
The shakiness in your voice is nothing more than a lack of confidence. When your not confident it makes you tense up and that's what causes problems. So just try and relax more and be aware of tension. Particularly in the vocal region but ideally your whole body should be as relaxed as possible.

This was a nice cover. Your best one yet overall.
Keep 'em coming Matty.