Review Me! (please?)

JazzBassist114 · Post by **JazzBassist114** » Fri Nov 19, 2004 10:31 pm

I just spent all of three minutes improvising a cool funk riff. I based it off of my bass teacher's funk riff that he showed me. check it out, and constructively criticize me? please? thanx

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/bassi ... dmusic.htm
it's called bass-ically funk cuz i'm a corny @$$hole

Matt

i like tictacs · Post by **i like tictacs** » Fri Nov 19, 2004 11:08 pm

Not bad, it has some timing woes here and there that are just minor, and a couple of bad notes, but I don't think you were basing on any scale or trying to follow a pattern.

Overall pretty nice, it's got some groove, but doesnt stray from the main pattern too much which does get repetitive.

JazzBassist114 · Post by **JazzBassist114** » Sat Nov 20, 2004 10:24 am

yeah, it was a first try, and just about completely improvised, so some timing is off, and a few wrong notes thrown in, but i wasn't really on any scale...i messed around with pentatonic and major, and threw in some chromatics for good measure, but it was just messin around... thanx

Matt

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Sat Nov 20, 2004 1:06 pm

crappy quality, but otherwise not bad. u've been workin on it for longer than 3 minutes ma friend, dont be lyin!

i am sam2 · Post by **i am sam2** » Sat Nov 20, 2004 5:53 pm

yeah i got this crappy static shit that i cant listen to for more than 20 seconds...so i didnt really listen....

carter29 · Post by **carter29** » Sun Nov 21, 2004 4:06 pm

yeah i couldnt stand that static, sounded groovy though. keep it up

i like tictacs · Post by **i like tictacs** » Sun Nov 21, 2004 5:04 pm

Sounded fine to me

bassman462 · Post by **bassman462** » Wed Nov 24, 2004 1:13 pm

crappy static sounded great to me though.

Bartender2424 · Post by **Bartender2424** » Wed Dec 01, 2004 4:22 am

Very funky man, keep up the good work 8)

JazzBassist114 · Post by **JazzBassist114** » Tue Jan 18, 2005 10:46 pm

damn...just realized what that static was. damn freeware. my bad, i'll try to fix that soon.

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Wed Jan 19, 2005 3:55 pm

... you win the prize, you realized it 2 months after posting it.