an original i wrote today

mbgreen · Post by **mbgreen** » Fri Nov 12, 2004 7:16 pm

I really liked it matty...cool riff man. Nice and mellow. I dig the lyrics too...good lines.

As far as critiquing goes, your voice sounds a little more nasal than the last couple of recordings you've put up. And you know I'm a fan of the simple stuff...but I think this would benefit a lot from a funky little breakdown of some sort. Just a thought. Good job man...you've been really impressive as of late.

Matty Boom · Post by **Matty Boom** » Fri Nov 12, 2004 7:18 pm

mbgreen wrote:I really liked it matty...cool riff man. Nice and mellow. I dig the lyrics too...good lines.

As far as critiquing goes, your voice sounds a little more nasal than the last couple of recordings you've put up. And you know I'm a fan of the simple stuff...but I think this would benefit a lot from a funky little breakdown of some sort. Just a thought. Good job man...you've been really impressive as of late.

thanks michael!

i might try to incorporate some little funky thing into it...though i think this might as far as this song goes...i can't really show it to the person i wrote it for...but it'd be nice to rock it out still, thanks again

a1075dd63aa12 · Post by **a1075dd63aa12** » Tue Nov 16, 2004 4:01 pm

cool ass song, its got a nice vibe, a break down where the i remember part is would be really cool. i liked it

NoNotThat · Post by **NoNotThat** » Tue Nov 16, 2004 4:59 pm

I love it and you matty

Matty Boom · Post by **Matty Boom** » Tue Nov 16, 2004 5:03 pm

why thank you kids

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Tue Nov 16, 2004 5:15 pm

kids, eh?