New Song "A Step Forward"

i like tictacs · Post by **i like tictacs** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 7:07 pm

It's good again. But I hate how you let it taper off. You know what I think of it from the other thread but I need to just say...it needs a more ...powerful end. The way you are giong with it just asks for an end that is strummed or just has more oomph in general, and like I said, i wouldn't go too overboard with the fade-out. Just let the sustain die out from the last notes, I personally like that better.

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 7:10 pm

i like tictacs wrote:It's good again. But I hate how you let it taper off. You know what I think of it from the other thread but I need to just say...it needs a more ...powerful end. The way you are giong with it just asks for an end that is strummed or just has more oomph in general, and like I said, i wouldn't go too overboard with the fade-out. Just let the sustain die out from the last notes, I personally like that better.

Yep, I know what you're talking about. That's the part I least like about this draft - the end. I want to be longer, with more "power" as you say. I also want it faded - not faded technically, but faded, you know? like quieter. The bad thing about this version is that it starts to fade out, and then like 40 seconds later, it ends. Much to gradual for me.

i like tictacs · Post by **i like tictacs** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 7:11 pm

You know like studio Grey St. That is a well-done fade-out. You have the right direction with it. I might go back to the intro riff for a few bars then go all out 'oomph' and fade that out.

Beauford33 · Post by **Beauford33** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 7:12 pm

i like tictacs wrote:Wooten

and Carter

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 7:13 pm

i like tictacs wrote:You know like studio Grey St. That is a well-done fade-out. You have the right direction with it. I might go back to the intro riff for a few bars then go all out 'oomph' and fade that out.

Yeah, I've toyed with that idea as well.

*Thinks a bit more*

I think I should do that.

oh, and do you think you could hook me up with that victor wooten track?

i like tictacs · Post by **i like tictacs** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 7:14 pm

yeah sure. get me on AIM. Mikethedbking

Beauford33 · Post by **Beauford33** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 7:15 pm

dmbguitar718 wrote:
i like tictacs wrote:You know like studio Grey St. That is a well-done fade-out. You have the right direction with it. I might go back to the intro riff for a few bars then go all out 'oomph' and fade that out.
Yeah, I've toyed with that idea as well.

*Thinks a bit more*

I think I should do that.

oh, and do you think you could hook me up with that victor wooten track?

definitly, Let me see if I have it on my comp, then I will host it...otherwise I might put it on later tonight (after hockey).

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 7:16 pm

Beauford33 wrote:
dmbguitar718 wrote:
i like tictacs wrote:You know like studio Grey St. That is a well-done fade-out. You have the right direction with it. I might go back to the intro riff for a few bars then go all out 'oomph' and fade that out.
Yeah, I've toyed with that idea as well.

*Thinks a bit more*

I think I should do that.

oh, and do you think you could hook me up with that victor wooten track?
definitly, Let me see if I have it on my comp, then I will host it...otherwise I might put it on later tonight (after hockey).

Tictacs is getting it to me now, but thanks.

Beauford33 · Post by **Beauford33** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 7:35 pm

dmbguitar718 wrote:
Beauford33 wrote:
dmbguitar718 wrote:
i like tictacs wrote:You know like studio Grey St. That is a well-done fade-out. You have the right direction with it. I might go back to the intro riff for a few bars then go all out 'oomph' and fade that out.
Yeah, I've toyed with that idea as well.

*Thinks a bit more*

I think I should do that.

oh, and do you think you could hook me up with that victor wooten track?
definitly, Let me see if I have it on my comp, then I will host it...otherwise I might put it on later tonight (after hockey).
Tictacs is getting it to me now, but thanks.

I didnt have it on my computer, so you are actually doing me a favor.

jimii3 · Post by **jimii3** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 11:40 pm

That was really great. I don't post much at all, but I thought it was important to tell you nice job. I will definetly keep that own my hard drive.

Looking forward to more,
Jim

gumbomadness · Post by **gumbomadness** » Mon Nov 08, 2004 7:40 pm

that was great. Im gonna burn it on my next mix cd... great music to study to. Or..just ... relax to. I like the end. ^_^

Speenis · Post by **Speenis** » Tue Nov 09, 2004 4:39 pm

Yeah that was awesome. I really dig that fade out. It doesn't sound anything like it, but it reminds me of the Last Stop Reprise outro, which is my fav part of BTCS, so nice work!