Also, My Stay or Leave cover

dpresti · Post by **dpresti** » Tue Oct 26, 2004 3:12 pm

ok, so i just did seek up as you see...

and i decided to do stay or leave real quick.. i messed up in the end and i was having pick problems, i got super glue on my finger tip and now i cant feel my pick.. oh well..

enjoy.. comments please..

http://s5.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=7C99A ... B3241DE102

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Tue Oct 26, 2004 3:32 pm

Ok, as i listen

you should flow a little better on your guitar part. it's like base note strum the high notes, it's too seperated. be more natural. it's hard for me to explain it, maybe someone else can explain it better. just keep the beat w/ your right hand more natural.

your voice is pretty good. maybe work on falsetto, but who doesn't need to work on that. and you miss a few little notes here and there but i can be a little more critical of the little stuff since your voice is overall pretty good.

the last part was atrocious. but you mentioned that, so i won't hark on it.

decent job. work on the strumming, the last part of the song, and concentrate a little more on the singing, you have the voice already.

dpresti · Post by **dpresti** » Tue Oct 26, 2004 3:39 pm

thanks

MWR · Post by **MWR** » Tue Oct 26, 2004 5:47 pm

Your hitting some wrong notes for the verse and it makes it sound kinda demented.
Your voice is good but it could be a whole lot better if you were'nt focusing on playing. Bravo for not trying to sound like Dave, you get major points for that.
You were generally playing/singing it far too aggresively.

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Tue Oct 26, 2004 8:07 pm

i think you need to even out the time you let the picked notes ring for. make it consistent.

good job singing that song aint an easy one!

dpresti · Post by **dpresti** » Tue Oct 26, 2004 10:00 pm

yeah i record the music... then sing over it...

my guitar needs some work..

pearljammer · Post by **pearljammer** » Wed Oct 27, 2004 1:39 pm

Why when i true to click on these usendit links does it always say link not available or some shit?

dpresti · Post by **dpresti** » Wed Oct 27, 2004 9:57 pm

mp3 here... http://s15.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=F378 ... 4062053950

i did it with the capo..

DMBartender · Post by **DMBartender** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 12:28 am

overall pretty good. i like your voice, but (like most everyone) it could use some practice. guitar was not bad, the last half needs work, but I think thats a pretty difficult part. good job and keep at it.