As for the picture, yea, it's the worst one I have of me, hence the reason for putting it up! I'll take it down so I don't offend anyone's eyes from here on out.
Kukini wrote:Thanks everyone for the criticism, trust me it's well taken. The shit sounds good while playing but when listening... it doesn't.
And the second chorus isn't a Dave riff, I made that up before I got my guitar (on my friends guitar). It sounded good to me so I threw it in my new song...
I'm working on it, but none of you offered corrections, those would help! Thanks again.
