MY ORIGINAL: ACOUSTIPLOSION IN G

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 10:38 am

this is my first original post and i am hesitant. but. it seems that nobody likes my covers so i'll see how they like this. its all G F C. i have lyrics but ill spare you....

goto the angelfire page in my sig...

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 1:03 pm

c'mon... whaddaya guys think?

Swe dmbfan · Post by **Swe dmbfan** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:13 pm

its sloppy... and the guitar dont fit together all the time..
and it really dont have rhythm...

but els.. good job.

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:17 pm

Swe dmbfan wrote:its sloppy... and the guitar dont fit together all the time..
and it really dont have rhythm...

but els.. good job.

when dont it fit together?

NoNotThat · Post by **NoNotThat** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:21 pm

I can't really seem to get into it
That first riff is kind of cool, but then there doesnt seem to be anything holding it together

Swe dmbfan · Post by **Swe dmbfan** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:21 pm

1.09
1.24,25,26
1.48,49

fatjack · Post by **fatjack** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:22 pm

if you are playing G F and C, then you aren't in the key of G...

fatjack · Post by **fatjack** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:25 pm

oh yeah, and if you actually write a song using just G F C, you have just written the least unique song ever, ESPECIALLY with the rhythm you were using

sunglassesatnight · Post by **sunglassesatnight** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:30 pm

Everyone wrote:You have just written the least unique song ever

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:33 pm

fatjack wrote:oh yeah, and if you actually write a song using just G F C, you have just written the least unique song ever, ESPECIALLY with the rhythm you were using

whats wrong with the rythm? and i just used GFC for the backup parts...

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:34 pm

Swe dmbfan wrote:1.09
1.24,25,26
1.48,49

alright... ill try and fix that

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:34 pm

slimerdmb24 wrote:
Everyone wrote:You have just written the least unique song ever

aw... how so? how can i make it better?

fatjack · Post by **fatjack** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:42 pm

praisedave wrote:
fatjack wrote:oh yeah, and if you actually write a song using just G F C, you have just written the least unique song ever, ESPECIALLY with the rhythm you were using
whats wrong with the rythm? and i just used GFC for the backup parts...

nothing is wrong with it per se, it's just that using that type of rhythm with that progression makes the song very generic

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:56 pm

fatjack wrote:
praisedave wrote:
fatjack wrote:oh yeah, and if you actually write a song using just G F C, you have just written the least unique song ever, ESPECIALLY with the rhythm you were using
whats wrong with the rythm? and i just used GFC for the backup parts...
nothing is wrong with it per se, it's just that using that type of rhythm with that progression makes the song very generic

what type of rythm part would you suggest? im tryin to improve

NoNotThat · Post by **NoNotThat** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:57 pm

praisedave wrote:
fatjack wrote:
praisedave wrote:
fatjack wrote:oh yeah, and if you actually write a song using just G F C, you have just written the least unique song ever, ESPECIALLY with the rhythm you were using
whats wrong with the rythm? and i just used GFC for the backup parts...
nothing is wrong with it per se, it's just that using that type of rhythm with that progression makes the song very generic
what type of rythm part would you suggest? im tryin to improve

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