PFWYG Cover

Rubinster · Post by **Rubinster** » Sat Oct 02, 2004 4:58 am

Well, I decided to post my first cover I just did, Pay For What You Get. Unfortunately, the quality is quite bad cos my recording stuff sucks. And I do also know I made a few mistakes, but it was just the third time I played it and I'm not that good at playing guitar while singing along. Maybe I should have left out the Norwegian Wood line

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Think I'm gonna practice it more often now. Some feedback would be welcome. Here we go:

http://www.angelfire.com/music6/rubinster/PFWYG.mp3

onid41 · Post by **onid41** » Sat Oct 02, 2004 8:28 am

link doesnt work

Rubinster · Post by **Rubinster** » Sat Oct 02, 2004 8:35 am

For me it does

onid41 · Post by **onid41** » Sat Oct 02, 2004 8:36 am

Angelfire does not allow direct linking
from offsite, non-Angelfire pages,
to files hosted on Angelfire.

Boyd · Post by **Boyd** » Sat Oct 02, 2004 8:40 am

Right click and "Save target as..." Worked for me. I like your voice. I think you're playin it a bit fast but that don't matter. Very nice.

Rubinster · Post by **Rubinster** » Sat Oct 02, 2004 8:49 am

Hm, thanks for the info. Tried to follow that thread where there's explained how to post mp3s in here, but it seems something went wrong

Rubinster · Post by **Rubinster** » Sat Oct 02, 2004 8:53 am

Boyd wrote:Right click and "Save target as..." Worked for me. I like your voice. I think you're playin it a bit fast but that don't matter. Very nice.

Oh, thank you

. You're right, I gotta admit it was probably a bit too fast. As I said, I'm gonna work on it

At least downloading works. Other opinions, both positive and negative, are appreciated.

Rubinster · Post by **Rubinster** » Sun Oct 03, 2004 2:04 am

Anyone else? Need some more critiques to know how to go on

onid41 · Post by **onid41** » Sun Oct 03, 2004 2:49 am

its not that bad at all, thought u did a good job, and its not that fast

Raif2032 · Post by **Raif2032** » Sun Oct 03, 2004 1:53 pm

I think your guitar is out of tune.

not half bad...chorus sounds pretty good, watch out for daves high notes.

CBalvarez · Post by **CBalvarez** » Sun Oct 03, 2004 3:57 pm

Raif2032 wrote:I think your guitar is out of tune.

not half bad...chorus sounds pretty good, watch out for daves high notes.

agreed, couldnt tell if it was the recording quality or not but it sounds out of tune. the overall rythm seemed a lil shaky too, but you did well.

Rubinster · Post by **Rubinster** » Mon Oct 04, 2004 12:47 am

Thanks for criticizing, guys 8)
And yes, it's possible my guitar was out of tune when I recorded it. I actually didn't mean to post it anywhere, but just wanted to hear how my singing sounds. Well, it seems there's much I could have done better

Of course, more feedback is still appreciated

wembly · Post by **wembly** » Mon Oct 04, 2004 1:42 pm

Guitar seems right on, and singing is pleasant. Over all I like it. Keep it up.

Rubinster · Post by **Rubinster** » Sat Oct 09, 2004 4:37 am

wembly wrote:Guitar seems right on, and singing is pleasant. Over all I like it. Keep it up.

Almost forgot to say thank you, so: thank you

And of course, I'm gonna keep up practicing.

DropD-MB · Post by **DropD-MB** » Wed Oct 13, 2004 7:34 pm

I thought is was pretty good.

You voice sounds like mine used to. I think you need to concentrate on your breathing a bit more & let the end notes resononate (vocally) Also dont sing those high note until you are comfortable...It was obvious you were straining/not hitting them.

I thought the guitar was not fast...(I have been a Dave fan for 10 years & if he played it at that speed I would never notice.)

Overall: B