All my Life.... a new original, written by myself, of course

nancies21 · Post by **nancies21** » Sat May 10, 2003 5:36 pm

here check it out....

All My Life

Sorry if the quality sucks but it went way down when i converted it
peace

DustyDave · Post by **DustyDave** » Sat May 10, 2003 6:24 pm

Great tune Nancies .... Smooth guitar playing , nice progression , great lyrics

nancies21 · Post by **nancies21** » Sun May 11, 2003 11:49 am

thanks man......any critiques neone?

nancies21 · Post by **nancies21** » Tue May 13, 2003 6:34 pm

ok, thats cool too

ModestMouse2003 · Post by **ModestMouse2003** » Tue May 13, 2003 10:32 pm

dude, you suck man.

ha ha ha. Just jokin man. Great work. I like it as much as that 1st one that you sent me. The guitar work is solid. I really like the guitar work. I think you could always improve on your vocals. By that i mean. Using more range. Like Dave does on Say Goodbye and loud parts.

great job man. Ur gettin alot better!!!

nancies21 · Post by **nancies21** » Wed May 14, 2003 9:22 am

yeah thanks man....i totally agree on the vocals thing.. i never even sang a lick in my life till i picked up my guitar, all my friends still think im no good but hey i try.... but um...more range as in i should hit some high notes or something? i can try...i kno i've tried on the first song, it sounded ok.... but yah ill work on it thanks....peace

firedancer86 · Post by **firedancer86** » Wed May 14, 2003 2:51 pm

Nice work man!

I really love it...the melody is great, the progression is smooth...very original and chill man!

Kepp the originals coming 8)

ModestMouse2003 · Post by **ModestMouse2003** » Wed May 14, 2003 6:52 pm

nancies21 wrote:yeah thanks man....i totally agree on the vocals thing.. i never even sang a lick in my life till i picked up my guitar, all my friends still think im no good but hey i try.... but um...more range as in i should hit some high notes or something? i can try...i kno i've tried on the first song, it sounded ok.... but yah ill work on it thanks....peace

Well, ya know when dave sings AATW, I woudn;t say he hollers, and he doesnt scream. but its louder and more emotion.

Dont get me wrong. You can sing 10x's better than me. Keep it up man. great work.