Stay Or Leave ---> *suprise*--->Stay Or Leave --->*

[Lou]

no lyrics (sry folks ) and it wasnt as good as id like it to be, but oh well......here ya go:

http://www.angelfire.com/alt/lou4140/

P.S. i know i suck. be gentle........yes thats right, I KNOW I SUCK. And some of u might not be able to figure out the suprise.....but lets see if ya can

[hd28v]

Lou, dont be so hard on yourself. It was not bad at all. I have not tried to play this song yet so I cant comment to much. However, some things came to mind. Play around with the rhythm a bit but more and the bass notes and try to be smoother and softer in your struming. I assoicate this Dave song with his gentle, lovey dovey songs. Keep working at it and sturming away. Your practice is paying off I can tell.

[MWR]

I would do two things: Make it a bit more light and airy like hd28v stated and I would get rid of the consecutive down strokes on the G. The rhythm should be the same (down up down) after the bass notes. Great start though.

P.S. Your in raised B? What do I win?

[firedancer86]

cool stuff...I guess I am out of the Dave ring, because I still don't know this one well enough to crituiqe fully ...but it does sound cool...clean it up some and it would be a real treat to listen to man


...(here comes the sun)...do do - do - do 8)

[Lou]

i cant think of anything to record.....im drawin a blank

[firedancer86]

do classical gas or something different

[Lou]

hahaha.......while im at it i could just do stream with my teeth.

[Lou]

im thinkin grey st......maybe even with *gasp* vocals. And if my singing is anything like my guitar playin, y'all are gonna wanna sue me for abuse