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Critique this pls. Crash Into Me on me new guitar =)

Unread post by MaveDatthews » Sat Aug 28, 2004 5:14 pm

Martin & Co =)
my voice is a little low =(


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Unread post by something cool » Sat Aug 28, 2004 6:43 pm

All your stuff sounds great, man. Good energy too.

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Unread post by adamondo » Sat Aug 28, 2004 6:53 pm

Good guitar, I don't like your voice.

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Unread post by DropD-MB » Sat Aug 28, 2004 8:23 pm

adamondo wrote:Good guitar, I don't like your voice.
Honesty is the best policy... I dont find your voice all that bad. Not bad at all. Nice job.

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Unread post by MWR » Sat Aug 28, 2004 8:50 pm

DropD-MB wrote:
adamondo wrote:Good guitar, I don't like your voice.
Honesty is the best policy... I dont find your voice all that bad. Not bad at all. Nice job.
Honesty IS the best policy but I think adamondo needs a lesson in constructive critisism(sp?).

As for the cover it was good. Your voice gets a little "whiney" at times but overall it was solid. Thats pretty much all I can say for this one.
When your covering a song you really should try and make it your own interpretation and not just a copy of the original. If you make it your own your not subject to direct comparisons not to mention it's far more interesting to listen to.
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Unread post by whatshername » Sat Aug 28, 2004 9:23 pm

adamondo wrote:Good guitar, I don't like your voice.
Good guitar, I hate YOU ADAMONDO YOU BITCH





i love your voice mave, the guitar is great too!!! i love all of your songs :D :D :D
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Unread post by everydayDMBfan_18 » Sat Aug 28, 2004 9:41 pm

What's wrong with what he said?
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Unread post by i like tictacs » Sat Aug 28, 2004 9:51 pm

That's fucking a good cover, don't listen to these people. I'd just get a better mic.
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Unread post by dmb_tatertot » Sat Aug 28, 2004 11:54 pm

i think the mic was by far the worst part of it (which is great). I loved it! The effort was very noticeable!
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Unread post by everydayDMBfan_18 » Sat Aug 28, 2004 11:59 pm

Good guitar overall. You should have turned up the vocals more though they get kinda lost. I don't know if it was just me but a little bit into the song it picks up a lot of reverb and then goes back to normal. You might want to turn up that second guitar too and just set to just the left channel or something because it gets kinda muddy. You seemed to stay on key throughout the song, and its just my personal opinion but I'm just not diggin the voice, but you did stay on key the whole song which is the important thing
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Unread post by chosta » Sun Aug 29, 2004 8:44 am

nice cover man
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Unread post by onid41 » Sun Aug 29, 2004 10:39 am

good cover man..thought all your songs were pretty good, keep it up
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Unread post by deceptivehero » Sun Aug 29, 2004 3:18 pm

I thought that was a really good cover and your voice really doesnt bother me at all. Good job.

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Unread post by Carl_SWE » Sun Aug 29, 2004 4:22 pm

AAAAH!!! It's mickey mouse singing!

Way too high pitched. However, you are definitely a talented singer... It's just the pitch that bugs me.

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Unread post by MaveDatthews » Sun Aug 29, 2004 6:03 pm

wow i really appreciate the input guys. flattered to the max :) . yeah i need to stop sucking on the helium tank..... wait...
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