Another Song Idea

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Mon Aug 23, 2004 4:29 pm

It kinda evolved from my last idea I had, which I didn't really like. This one is a bit better I think.

I recorded this very quickly, just to get the idea down. It's a little rough in some spots (like always), but I wasn't really putting much effort into it.

Also, tell me what you think about the last/final part. I'm iffy about it.

http://www.patmcinnis.com/newsong2.mp3

mdel21 · Post by **mdel21** » Mon Aug 23, 2004 4:38 pm

I like

MWR · Post by **MWR** » Mon Aug 23, 2004 5:01 pm

It definitely sounds uninspired.

I know it's a rough recording but in comparison to One Day and your other stuff it was amateur.

I'm starting to feel like Simon Cowell.

btw Have you ever listened to Don Ross? Check out "Klimbin" from Passion Session. I think you would like him.

kcw · Post by **kcw** » Mon Aug 23, 2004 8:00 pm

you need a fill between the solo and the beginning part of the song it just seems to jump in there.

rampaged.congt · Post by **rampaged.congt** » Fri Sep 03, 2004 12:23 pm

The solo part reminds me a lot of "dodo"...but it's still good...I like it..keep it up

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Fri Sep 03, 2004 12:24 pm

Oh yeah... I decided against this one.

i am sam2 · Post by **i am sam2** » Fri Sep 03, 2004 5:36 pm

dude can i have it?

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Fri Sep 03, 2004 5:38 pm

sure. take it.

70% of the songs I write end up in the trash. This being one of them. However, I'm finally feeling confident about one right now.