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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Tue Aug 10, 2004 10:13 am

http://www.patmcinnis.com/newsong.mp3

It's only about a minute. I just want to how the groove sounds to you guys. Too bland? Too unoriginal? What do you think? And I didn't really want that little pause to be in there, but I didn't want to record another rhythm track.

btw, it's one acoustic and one electric.
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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Tue Aug 10, 2004 10:50 am

Not bad. Not really my type of music though.
I can imagine someone with big permed hair and tight leather pants playing this.

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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Tue Aug 10, 2004 10:52 am

Ha, I know what you mean. It's really not my type either. It's just the electric that does it.
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Unread post by GreedylilPig » Tue Aug 10, 2004 11:16 am

Sounds pretty good. It sounds like something Lynyrd Skynyrd would come up with. This would sound ten times better with a real drummer throwing in some rolls and whatnot. The guitars sound good, though. Interesting riff. I always enjoy your solid work on guitar. What kind of electric are you using?
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Unread post by snapoffmode » Tue Aug 10, 2004 1:15 pm

sound pretty cool. there's a robert cray song that has a pretty similar riff and vibe....but i can't recall the name.

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Unread post by bngholio14 » Tue Aug 10, 2004 3:43 pm

Sounds like a video game riff, somethin that would be in Crash Bandicoot or something, but I dig it.

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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Tue Aug 10, 2004 4:12 pm

snapoffmode wrote:sound pretty cool. there's a robert cray song that has a pretty similar riff and vibe....but i can't recall the name.
well shit.

oh well.

anyone happen to know the name?
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Unread post by Jer1400 » Tue Aug 10, 2004 5:25 pm

Good work, man.

It kind of reminds me of "Hot Blooded".
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Tue Aug 10, 2004 5:36 pm

thanks guys.

Jer - hot blooded by who?
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Unread post by bngholio14 » Tue Aug 10, 2004 5:57 pm

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Unread post by MWR » Tue Aug 10, 2004 5:59 pm

Not bad but I've heard it before if you know what I mean.

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Unread post by Swe dmbfan » Tue Aug 10, 2004 6:03 pm

hehe.. sounds nice pat!
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