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Untitled *piece of crap* open to suggestions...

Unread post by Kukini » Mon Aug 09, 2004 3:14 am

http://www.angelfire.com/music6/marqagboyani

Go there and listen to untitled and tell me how bad it is. I wrote everything on there about how to get it touch with me so let me know, if you think it's total shit, just say so...
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Unread post by katie » Mon Aug 09, 2004 1:18 pm

oh man it's hard to see you be so hard on yourself.

what key is that in?

when you start getting into the groove with the chords it sounds really nice. When it goes higher into the chords it's like your head is going to explode, but in a happy way.

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Unread post by MWR » Mon Aug 09, 2004 4:40 pm

I'm not gonna lie that was rough but we all were beginners once.

Keep recording, you'll learn more from it than anything else.

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Unread post by Kukini » Mon Aug 09, 2004 8:19 pm

how do I tell what key it's in? I feel like my little sister was like "how should I make this [frozen mac and cheese] we don't have microwave OVEN." I was like you dumbass... Now I feel stupid for asking that question.

So anyways, I'm not musically inclined, I just picked up a guitar and started reading tabs so I have no idea how to tell what key a song is in, I just made it up. If someone wants to fill me in on how to post tabs, I'd gladly do it for you.
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Unread post by Raif2032 » Mon Aug 09, 2004 11:36 pm

Yeah, for real man, ease up on yourself :)

Not a bad rift, hell man, I haven't ever had a guitar lesson...and now I can play at least 8 dave songs! heh, just playing

For real, have some fun, keep reading tabs and just play a lot and fool around.

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Unread post by Kukini » Tue Aug 10, 2004 12:47 am

I've never had a lesson either, I'm sure thats a problem... I don't have the $ I spent it all on my guitar.
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Unread post by Mulletman » Tue Aug 10, 2004 2:45 am

you don't need lessons man you just need to keep at it and you'll be fine. i don't think i've ever known someone that's taken lessons that still plays. the people i've heard of that take them do it and give up guitar a month later.

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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Tue Aug 10, 2004 2:48 am

It isn't bad, but you don't seem to have it going in a certain direction. Just jumbled together. work on it and it could be decent. Don't worry about keys and all that as of right now.. just do what you know how to do and get real good at it
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