NEW song idea

superman0710 · Post by **superman0710** » Thu Jun 24, 2004 3:41 pm

did it in one take. all live. lyrics are made up, i'll write down real ones later.

just concentrate on the sound. let me know.

http://www.haloevo.y-host.com/misc_files/follow.mp3

Mjazk26 · Post by **Mjazk26** » Thu Jun 24, 2004 4:35 pm

Sounds pretty good....

Reminds me of radiohead which is a good thing

Macht · Post by **Macht** » Thu Jun 24, 2004 4:39 pm

is decent, very decent

superman0710 · Post by **superman0710** » Thu Jun 24, 2004 5:19 pm

Mjazk26 wrote:Sounds pretty good....

Reminds me of radiohead which is a good thing

never gotten that before

Macht · Post by **Macht** » Thu Jun 24, 2004 5:27 pm

but ti does kind of sound like Radiohead

juineaux · Post by **juineaux** » Thu Jun 24, 2004 5:55 pm

I love writing this on the spot type of stuff, its alot more fun. Good work-

mdel21 · Post by **mdel21** » Thu Jun 24, 2004 7:13 pm

superman0710 · Post by **superman0710** » Thu Jun 24, 2004 7:26 pm

i hold the record for longest member with lowest post count

BlueWaters · Post by **BlueWaters** » Fri Jun 25, 2004 2:43 am

superman0710 wrote:i hold the record for longest member with lowest post count

...that's cause some people have no lives and stay on the board all day saying things like "nice" all the time and other, no thought involved/one line coments...quantity over quality I guess.......

About your song, it's not a very complicated one or upbeat at this point at least. Sounds good, but my advice would be that the lyrics really carry the song. If you think of all the meaningful simpler songs you've ever heard, the lyrics usually rock. On that note, a creative vocal support would also help, but probably not as necessary as the lyrics being good. Definitely could be awesome...good luck

charliemike · Post by **charliemike** » Fri Jun 25, 2004 6:38 am

BlueWaters wrote:
superman0710 wrote:i hold the record for longest member with lowest post count
...that's cause some people have no lives and stay on the board all day saying things like "nice" all the time and other, no thought involved/one line coments...quantity over quality I guess.......

About your song, it's not a very complicated one or upbeat at this point at least. Sounds good, but my advice would be that the lyrics really carry the song. If you think of all the meaningful simpler songs you've ever heard, the lyrics usually rock. On that note, a creative vocal support would also help, but probably not as necessary as the lyrics being good. Definitely could be awesome...good luck

I'd argue that it's not the words as much as it is the melody.

I mean for fuck's sake, "Hold My Hand" was a great song because of the catchy melody but the lyrics were just wetahded

BlueWaters · Post by **BlueWaters** » Sun Jun 27, 2004 2:10 am

charliemike wrote:I'd argue that it's not the words as much as it is the melody.

I mean for fuck's sake, "Hold My Hand" was a great song because of the catchy melody but the lyrics were just wetahded

That is an awesome song, but the melody in the vocals is what makes the song. You're right about melody, but the word are what define the song.