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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Sat May 01, 2004 8:20 am

dmbguitar718 wrote:now im angry. :( i'll have to give this one up.

thanks for the comments though guys.
DON'T DO IT!!!!
One song is always gonna sound similar to another no matter what you do. If it's really obvious then change it a little but don't just drop it.
I had it on repeat for like 5 minutes.

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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sat May 01, 2004 8:40 am

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:
dmbguitar718 wrote:now im angry. :( i'll have to give this one up.

thanks for the comments though guys.
DON'T DO IT!!!!
One song is always gonna sound similar to another no matter what you do. If it's really obvious then change it a little but don't just drop it.
I had it on repeat for like 5 minutes.
haha, i won't really. ;) i just might have to tweak some things if it sounds that similar.

the thing is that i think when i rewrote one part (:21) DR DR was playing in the back of my head. which sucks. but i think thats the only thing (to me at least) that sounds like it. i had gotten into this style before i had ever heard the song.

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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sat May 01, 2004 4:12 pm

just to defend my spot a little bit - the justin king video also sounds similar to mine. its just when you use that style, its very easy for this to happen. i had no intention of copying either artist. http://www.albinoblacksheep.com/video/guitar.php

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Unread post by sheabraden » Sun May 02, 2004 8:43 pm

Wow, that was fuckin sweet, repeated it a couple times, This may be a stupid question who is Dr Dr

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Unread post by sheabraden » Sun May 02, 2004 8:45 pm

Drive in Drive Out???

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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sun May 02, 2004 8:50 pm

sheabraden wrote:Drive in Drive Out???
no, its an amazing song by Don Alder (acoustic guitarist)

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Unread post by 6_strings_for_life » Mon May 03, 2004 4:02 pm

wow good tune, I love the guitar work. Sounds like a Keller Williams song. But Keller is the fucking man, so that is a good thing. Keep it up
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Unread post by katie » Tue May 04, 2004 2:46 pm

really nice work you have here - I agree keller williams is awesome. It definetly has a driving force, motivation, hard to explain. It almost feels like a decision of sorts and the movement in proceeding. Thanks for sharing your work, really nice - an inspiration (pat is it?)

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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Tue May 04, 2004 4:46 pm

katie wrote:really nice work you have here - I agree keller williams is awesome. It definetly has a driving force, motivation, hard to explain. It almost feels like a decision of sorts and the movement in proceeding. Thanks for sharing your work, really nice - an inspiration (pat is it?)
thanks alot. :) i appreciate it. and yes, its pat. :)

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Unread post by Jer1400 » Thu May 13, 2004 6:27 pm

That's amazing, man. It's amazing you're 15, as well. You must have been playin' since you were three. Heh.

I think it would be interesting to hear what it would sound like with a well-written snare drum track behind it... with a lot of rolls and build-ups.

Definitely top-grade work here.
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