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MaveDatthews · Post by **MaveDatthews** » Thu Apr 15, 2004 3:27 pm

sorry, too many "dave yall's". i think i said yo in there a couple times too ahaha, i dont know why. blah, i was kind of tired, did it last night. Little off on the timing and the lyrics at times. But anyways tell me what "yall" think.
thnx

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MaveDatthews · Post by **MaveDatthews** » Fri Apr 16, 2004 3:25 am

Sorry havnt been on in a while. Thank you all for the comments!!!! I'm going to be re-doing most of the songs when i get my new martin! cant wait! Thnx for the input, gotta take those damn daveisms out!

Thanks 41ants, if you ever want to hook up, just give me a call

...... wait, what!??!? haha.

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Ryeguy · Post by **Ryeguy** » Fri Apr 16, 2004 9:43 am

I think that song would sound better if it were slowed down a little. pretty hard to critique, it was well done..

gravesRR7 · Post by **gravesRR7** » Fri Apr 16, 2004 10:28 am

A bit too fast. I think the singing sounds too talky, but i think that it is a direct result of the pace of the song.

if you slowed it down a little bit it would be supurb. so needless to say the playing was right on, and the everything else seemed to fall into place nicely.
Well done

DMBFan63 · Post by **DMBFan63** » Fri Apr 16, 2004 10:32 am

gravesRR7 wrote:A bit too fast. I think the singing sounds too talky, but i think that it is a direct result of the pace of the song.

if you slowed it down a little bit it would be supurb. so needless to say the playing was right on, and the everything else seemed to fall into place nicely.
Well done

That is untrue, he played it a bit too fast for the way the song was made.. so the playing wasn't right on.. he may have had the right chords, but the feel was totally different... good job anyway, mave

gravesRR7 · Post by **gravesRR7** » Fri Apr 16, 2004 11:22 am

DMBFan63 wrote:
gravesRR7 wrote:A bit too fast. I think the singing sounds too talky, but i think that it is a direct result of the pace of the song.

if you slowed it down a little bit it would be supurb. so needless to say the playing was right on, and the everything else seemed to fall into place nicely.
Well done
That is untrue, he played it a bit too fast for the way the song was made.. so the playing wasn't right on.. he may have had the right chords, but the feel was totally different... good job anyway, mave

it's obvious what i meant. i addressed that i thought the playing was too fast. and i thought it was obvious that i meant that the chord changes etc were right on. maybe not, but that's what i mean

trebor · Post by **trebor** » Fri Apr 16, 2004 5:15 pm

ill be honest.

i really liked your other covers... i think you have great voice that will be even better when developed... your a natural i guess and also with the guitar cosidering uve been playing for 10 months only? woah

i didnt like this one though... i guess some parts were too talky and in ur other covers you did try to sound like dave but i think you did a pretty good job with it. with this one though it was diffrent tho there weresome parts i liked.

i dont know, maybe it couldve better if you did slow it them and took it easy coz this is a veryyy steady song and it felt like you took a more pop beat to it .

still good job.

DMBFan63 · Post by **DMBFan63** » Fri Apr 16, 2004 9:27 pm

gravesRR7 wrote:
DMBFan63 wrote:
gravesRR7 wrote:A bit too fast. I think the singing sounds too talky, but i think that it is a direct result of the pace of the song.

if you slowed it down a little bit it would be supurb. so needless to say the playing was right on, and the everything else seemed to fall into place nicely.
Well done
That is untrue, he played it a bit too fast for the way the song was made.. so the playing wasn't right on.. he may have had the right chords, but the feel was totally different... good job anyway, mave
it's obvious what i meant. i addressed that i thought the playing was too fast. and i thought it was obvious that i meant that the chord changes etc were right on. maybe not, but that's what i mean

I thought that's what you mean,t i was just making sure

whatshername · Post by **whatshername** » Fri Apr 16, 2004 9:52 pm

it's just a little fast. other than that, i love the guitar, i love your voice..and well, i think i love you. :rawr:

and no, i'm not a dude.

everydayDMBfan_18 · Post by **everydayDMBfan_18** » Fri Apr 16, 2004 10:11 pm

You try to sound too much like Dave bro...Once you get passed that you'll sound much better

whatshername · Post by **whatshername** » Fri Apr 16, 2004 10:54 pm

everydayDMBfan_18 wrote:You try to sound too much like Dave bro...Once you get passed that you'll sound much better

i really don't think he's trying to. i honestly think that's his voice. i love his voice...it sort of resembles dave's, but not enough to the point where i'm like "wow, this kid is trying.."

i think if he didn't cover a dave song his voice would still be awesome. i love it.

everydayDMBfan_18 · Post by **everydayDMBfan_18** » Fri Apr 16, 2004 10:58 pm

Eh whatever...I just don't think all of its natural whether its done on purpose or not.

If I sound pissy or whatever it's because I'm itchy...or something like that...

dmb_tatertot · Post by **dmb_tatertot** » Sat Apr 17, 2004 12:38 am

other then it being a little too fast i thought it was quality work.

trebor · Post by **trebor** » Sat Apr 17, 2004 4:29 am

yeah i dont think it sounds like its forced or anything
fits his voice probably coz its so high and loose
only time i notice the DAVEISSSMS is when he says all that YO! Yall! Awh!
or whatever, all those lil side comments during the song, but i think that too can be worked out to be better.
it seems with your wide vocal range it will fall nicely into most voices you want to sound like,
just fix the tempo bro , nakamampota!

dpresti · Post by **dpresti** » Thu Apr 22, 2004 10:00 pm

yeah please please so down, they would be much better that way.

i liked the vocals, alot! keep it up!