Newbie, first recording inside - typical situation

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dpresti
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Newbie, first recording inside - typical situation

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let me know what u guys think

thanks..

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its up now!
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click on downloads!!!


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not too shabby... good work
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Voice and rythm guitar was good, but the lead guitar was quite off in places. Particularly the rythym of the leads and a lot of the notes were out of the key of the song. In my opinion the song would be much better without the lead track. Also, try to supress the urge to sing like Dave.
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