I've only posted one other recording on here...and its cuz I stink at singing No but seriously, I'm really trying to work on my singing and staying on key, so any comments/advice/feedback would be great. This one was a bit high...I dunno how Paul does it...
Here are two links: (same song, just in case one goes down, use the 2nd)
I think you self diagnosed your problems so i'll leave it at that and say keep practicing with the vocals. From what I hear you will be on key for a bit and then hit a series of notes that is off key and slowly make it back to the key. This just takes time to develop. May I also recomend some better equipment, I have a crappy dell mic and cool edit 2000 and I get some descent quality, so i think it is probably your software. Keep posting, i'd like to hear you progress with your singing.
I'll play it first and tell you what it is later.
- Miles Davis